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PostSubject: [Haru Satsujin/ Jutsu Registration]   Sun Mar 18, 2012 3:18 am


Name: JigoKazuki (Hell Stab)
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: A
Type: Nintaijutsu
Element: Raiton
Distance: Close
Description: Charge equal to hand seals. After the charge the user sends raiton chakra to the finger tips of a single hand. After this the user performs a thrusting motion which allows piercing and cutting power based on the amount of fingers used. The intensity, size and strength of the technique can be proportionally increased by reducing the number of fingers involved:
  • Four-Finger Nukite (四本貫手, Yonhon Nukite): This is the weakest of the Nukite and the initial form when the tech is activated. More damage is done to inanimate objects than living things, cutting half of the users finger length into the target. This form can shred through steel and rends through human flesh with ease, being able to slice halfway through a human torso in a single swipe. It can also defend from B Rank techniques (C Rank Fuuton, A Rank Doton) by slicing through them.
  • Three-Finger Nukite (三本貫手, Sanbon Nukite): This is the second strongest form of Nukite and the second form that can be used. This jutsu can pierce the whole fingers length into a human body. This form rips titanium to pieces with each swipe and can slice completely through a human torso in a single swipe. It can also defend against A Rank techniques (B Rank Fuuton, S Rank Doton) by slice through them.
  • One-Finger Nukite (一本貫手, Ippon Nukite): Known as the "strongest spear" (最強の矛, saikyō no hoko), where the concentration of chakra is so great that it extends well beyond the finger in a lone point about a foot off of the finger tip. This being the strongest form of the nukite has the most extreme powers. It can rend even indestrutable items useless and has been known to cut off the tails of bijuu (as seen against the Raikage and the 8 tailed Oxen). In a single slash the human body can be cut in half in any direction. This can block S Rank jutsu (A Rank Fuuton)


Lasts for 7 posts. After the jutsu is used, there is a 10 post cool down. Twice per topic use.

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PostSubject: Re: [Haru Satsujin/ Jutsu Registration]   Sun Mar 18, 2012 11:09 am

Is this a variation of chidori? If so, it is denied. Remember, chidori cannot be variated.

On a side note, do not use the 'Like Butter' reference when describing piercing power. It's too cliche and still doesn't give enough info. How deep could it penetrate and would the wound due to the lightning make the wound larger then the size of the hand? Etc.

Once again, Haji, Takeshi and I will discuss the parameters of this jutsu. Saying that it charges like chidori shouldn't have been used.

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PostSubject: Re: [Haru Satsujin/ Jutsu Registration]   Sun Mar 18, 2012 2:50 pm

Edited out the chidori reference, the technique is a jutsu used by the third Raikage during his fight with the 8 tails and naruto

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PostSubject: Re: [Haru Satsujin/ Jutsu Registration]   Sun Mar 18, 2012 5:34 pm

Well now your going to have to make this site ready. If you read above, I said the use of 'Like Butter' I don't want to see. I need damage of a human body, cooldowns and msingle use ote importantly if it is a single use attack, or a duration attack. Take out what jutsu it can tear through and use just rank of jutsu in general.

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PostSubject: Re: [Haru Satsujin/ Jutsu Registration]   Sun Mar 18, 2012 6:29 pm

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PostSubject: Re: [Haru Satsujin/ Jutsu Registration]   Tue Mar 20, 2012 6:50 pm

Bump

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PostSubject: Re: [Haru Satsujin/ Jutsu Registration]   Tue Mar 20, 2012 7:49 pm

Its still too vague. You need to give EXACTLY what it can tear through, not just inanimate objects. You know the standards bro, so why arent you using it to do this jutsu? Tell me if it can tear through metals, what can protect from it, etc.

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PostSubject: Re: [Haru Satsujin/ Jutsu Registration]   Tue Mar 20, 2012 8:48 pm

Well, I'm trying to gauge this off of the wiki, but it has very, very vague specs. I know for a fact that the one finger Nukite cut off all the tails of the 8 tailed oxen, pierced Raiton no Yuroi and left the only scar the third raikage ever recieved

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PostSubject: Re: [Haru Satsujin/ Jutsu Registration]   Tue Mar 20, 2012 9:26 pm

All you have to do is make it site worthy, using the methods we always use.

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PostSubject: Re: [Haru Satsujin/ Jutsu Registration]   Tue Mar 20, 2012 10:01 pm

Edited, I think I'm probably gonna have to bump it to an S Rank, but I'm gonna need some help with adding fair drawbacks to match the power. I think a 15+ day cooldown will probably be in order along with some other things.

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PostSubject: Re: [Haru Satsujin/ Jutsu Registration]   Thu Mar 22, 2012 10:25 am

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PostSubject: Re: [Haru Satsujin/ Jutsu Registration]   Thu Mar 22, 2012 4:16 pm

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The Third was a very powerful Lightning Release user, known for using Black Lightning, which he passed on to Darui. Like his son he is also capable of using the Lightning Release Armour. Similar to the Chidori he can focus his lightning chakra into his fingers, creating a strong piercing effect and can make the piercing effect even more powerful by focusing the lightning chakra by reducing the number of fingers used. Dodai states that it is his strongest ninjutsu referring to it as the "strongest spear" (最強の矛, saikyō no hoko). With this power he could cut off all the tails of the Eight-Tails at once, and even pierce his own body.

Now here it states that the third raikage, the owner of this jutsu, had Raiton no Yori, lighting armor, and in fact could condense it to do the hell stab. As well, the pictures of him using hell stab show him in lightning armor mode. With this information, I feel that this move can either be a special case jutsu by its self, or a move able to be utilized once someone buys lightning armor. This would be similar to someone having gates and being able to use front lotus or leaf hot wind.

http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Third_Raikage

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PostSubject: Re: [Haru Satsujin/ Jutsu Registration]   Thu Mar 22, 2012 5:12 pm

I knew it would be special case as soon as I saw it. The fact that one has to have lightning armor means that this jutsu will need to be special case. However, lasting for seven posts is way too much. I believe also, that it is too powerful to allow to be done with lightning armor. I say allow it separate, but only three primary lightning users can have it and that is it. Cooldown needs to be massive.

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PostSubject: Re: [Haru Satsujin/ Jutsu Registration]   Thu Mar 22, 2012 5:56 pm

This technique does not require Ration no Yuroi, he was not using it at the time he activated it. Now the million dollar question is am I going to have to forfeit gates for this jutsu?

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I think I'm probably gonna have to bump it to an S Rank, but I'm gonna need some help with adding fair drawbacks to match the power. I think a 15+ day cooldown will probably be in order along with some other things.

Also, The duration seems more like a 3-4 post use

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PostSubject: Re: [Haru Satsujin/ Jutsu Registration]   Thu Mar 22, 2012 6:22 pm

Even if this jutsu does not require Raiton no Yuroi it is still immensely powerful and does border the effects of the special case jutsu that is Chidori 1000 birds. I read through the jutsu as well and i feel that it is also a special case.

Now whether or not the jutsu has ties to lightning armor is not my concern. My concern is that three mods have read through this jutsu and seen it as a special case, that being Dominic, Raleth and myself. So the actualy million dollar question would be, how are we going to go about making this a special case jutsu? Because if i'm not mistaken, special case jutsu are jutsu that would normally be banned on other websites due to their incredible power. This technique was used by the third raikage in the manga to sever ALL eight tails of the eight tails bijuu. So overall i feel it falls into a special case category.

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PostSubject: Re: [Haru Satsujin/ Jutsu Registration]   Thu Mar 22, 2012 6:26 pm

I can make it a special case like this:

  • Requires Taijutsu and Ninjutsu in the first three specialties
  • Raiton as primary element


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1. ______
2. ______
3. ______

But Im not taking this If Im forced to give up gates. I only intended on letting me get this jutsu such as Dom and ultimate flash mode.

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PostSubject: Re: [Haru Satsujin/ Jutsu Registration]   Thu Mar 22, 2012 7:41 pm

Also, Fuuton is an element that is strong against fire, so A rank fuuton will nullify it. B rank would possibly nullify, but due to it being special case, b rank would probably reduce up to 60% of the effects. I don't want to see jutsu that are weak against an element, suddenly block jutsu they are weak against.

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PostSubject: Re: [Haru Satsujin/ Jutsu Registration]   Thu Mar 22, 2012 7:44 pm

I see your argument

S Rank - Cancels
A Rank - Reduces power 80%
B Rank - Reduces power 60%

Look reasonable?

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PostSubject: Re: [Haru Satsujin/ Jutsu Registration]   Fri Mar 23, 2012 6:10 pm

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Name: Front Lotus
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: B
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Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close-Medium
Description: Front Lotus requires the opening of the first of the Eight Chakra Gates, giving the user two times their normal strength. The user launches the opponent into the air and then uses Shadow of the Dancing Leaf. Once behind the opponent, the user restrains them and piledrives them into the ground headfirst while rotating at a ferocious speed. Because it uses one of the chakra gates, the user is left extremely fatigued, making this jutsu a "double-edged sword." The use of this technique more than once in a topic will cause a 2 post fatigue and can only be used three times max per fight.

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PostSubject: Re: [Haru Satsujin/ Jutsu Registration]   Sat Mar 24, 2012 10:11 pm

Roy deducted

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PostSubject: Re: [Haru Satsujin/ Jutsu Registration]   Mon Mar 26, 2012 7:15 pm

Bump

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PostSubject: Re: [Haru Satsujin/ Jutsu Registration]   Fri Mar 30, 2012 6:27 pm

Still needing to talk with Tak and Haji on this. We cant all seem to get a hold of each other at the same time.

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PostSubject: Re: [Haru Satsujin/ Jutsu Registration]   Fri Mar 30, 2012 10:25 pm

i'm gunna say no on the 3x per fight, you need a speed on your spin, and you need a max damage ratio. also what happens if your attack fails, is this attack blockable, and what would yo use to retain the person.

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PostSubject: Re: [Haru Satsujin/ Jutsu Registration]   Wed Apr 04, 2012 5:59 pm

Haji... I took that from the database

Anway, bump

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PostSubject: Re: [Haru Satsujin/ Jutsu Registration]   Sun Apr 08, 2012 10:41 pm

I moved Hell Stab to the Canon Approval section


Name: Knock Back
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Kenjutsu
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Distance: Length of Blade
Description: Charge equal to hand seals. After a charge, the user coats his blade in a film of chakra that allows him to knock back jutsu at its user. This is done by hitting the used jutsu with a side of the sword rather than the blade itself. By doing this B rank and lower jutsu can be knocked back at the user. After this is used there is a 4 post cool down.

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