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Dominic Edrick
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PostSubject: [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration]   [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration] I_icon_minitimeSat Sep 15, 2012 3:58 pm

D Rank

Name: Yonbi no Ōkami: Scorch Cloak
Canon/Custom: Custom
Type: Bijuu Chakra
Element: -
Distance: Self
Description: This cloaked form is something produced by the Yonbi no Ookami's chakra stored within the host's body which emerges in fits of rage (eventually at will through training) but is not strong enough to actually form any of the Yonbi's tails. The cloak is a layer of Crimson chakra that covers the host's body and is a few inches thick, while in this form the user is granted the benefits of being one rank higher in Taijutsu knowledge (+20%). In this form the hosts strength increases by 20% what it had been before. The host does not need to perform hand seals to be able to enter this cloaked form, however, they can't just simply choose to go into this form. At first the host can only enter this form if triggered by rage or another extremely strong emotion, however doing this means that they have no control over themselves in this form and will attack everyone around them friend and foe alike (MUST attack ally at least one time). If the host wants to be able to control their demon in cloak form they must train solo or with a single partner for 750 words, after that they are free to not only control themselves but to use this cloaked form at will. The host is able to remain in this cloaked-form for a maximum of six rounds before training to control it and they come out completely exhausted for three turns, after training they are able to stay in it for twelve rounds and come out only exhausted for a turn.

Name: Scorch Style: Canine Scout
Canon/Custom: Custom
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Scorch
Distance: 0-5 ft.
Description: Requires handseals. The user creates a small wolf, nearly 1 foot tall, resembling an odd sort of clone. This clone is made of heat alone, combining the wind and fire elements. It is completely translucent except for the small ripple in the air where it stands, giving away its position to a very very skilled eye. The small wolf has no chakra, and has no offensive capabilities. Its only ability is to constantly send information through chakra wavelengths to its creator, no matter how far away the creator is. The wolf must be made fairly close to the user, although it can run off as far as a half mile, constantly sending wavelengths back to its owner, relaying everything it sees to his mind every two seconds. The small wolf can be destroyed by any attack with slight force (AKA punches and kicks. It can't be destroyed by walking through it or by poking it). It lasts for 10 rounds of posts. Usable twice per topic with a 3 post cooldown.

Name: Scorch Release: Heat Wave Push
Canon/Custom: Custom
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Scorch
Distance: 10 ft.
Description: Requires handseals. The user emits a small ball of heat from their palm, pushing it forward. If hitting skin, this jutsu causes 1st degree burns in the area it hits (1ft. Radius). It travels at a slow pace of 30mph, making this jutsu less practical for combat, and more effective in common areas of boiling water, melting regular ice, and causing very small animals (mouse-sized), plants, and bugs to dry out and die. If shot into an eyeball, it can cause extreme eye irritation. Has a 2 post cooldown.

C Rank

Name: Yonbi no Ōkami: Beginning the Madness
Canon/Custom: Custom
Type: Bijuu Chakra
Element: -
Distance: Self
Description: At the first tail, Lee gains a semi-transparent crimson chakra cloak that increases his reflexes so that he can gains a 20% speed/reaction boost making them on par with someone one rank higher then them, and is boosted one more round in Taijutsu. From the base of the host's spine emerges a gigantic tail like that of a wolf, the tail is normally seven feet long but once per round it can be extended to double that length (one round charge and a four round cool down). The tail can be used to attack at speeds topping 50 mph. The tip of the tail is sharp enough to puncture steel as well as being able to completely shred through lesser materials. The host does not need to perform hand seals to be able to enter this first tail-beast cloak however they can't just simply choose to go into this form. At first the host can only enter this form if triggered by rage or another extremely strong emotion, however doing this means that they have no control over themselves in this form and will attack everyone around them friend and foe alike (MUST attack ally at least one time). If the host wants to be able to control their demon in cloak form they must train solo or with a single partner for 1500 words, after that they are free to not only control themselves but to use this tailed form at will. The host is able to remain in this cloaked-form for a maximum of six rounds before training to control it and they come out completely exhausted for three turns, after training they are able to stay in it for twelve rounds and come out only exhausted for a turn.

Name: Fire Release: Mist Blaze Dance Technique
Canon/Custom: Canon
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Distance: 50ft x 50ft x 30ft
Description: After performing the necessary hand seals, the user is able to create and blow a flammable gas from their lungs. While this gas is completely harmless other than causing a the affected to become light headed on it own once it comes in contact with fire or spark, the gas ignites into a large fireball. This fire ball is more of an explosion, expanding out ten feet past the gas in every direction. If someone is near the center of the cloud this has the potential to be lethal (more from the force than the heat) but more often than not the effects are full body second degree burns. The user is not affected by the gas cloud in any way except that their vision is impaired like everyone else and if it is set off they are affected like normal. 4 round cool down.

Name: Katon: Dragon Fire Technique
Canon/Custom: Canon
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Distance: 50 ft.
Description: The user breathes fire, which rushes forward in straight line catching the enemy on fire. The flames are meant to target, and assault the enemy's upper body just like a projectile weapon. Can cause second degree burns on direct contact and within six inches of the flame. The flame travels at 60 mph, making it extremely effective at close range. Requires hand seals. 4 post cool down.

B Rank

Name: Yonbi no Ōkami: The Full Moon Grows
Canon/Custom: Custom
Type: Bijuu Chakra
Element: -
Distance: Self
Description: When the two-tailed cloak is activated a wave of fierce burning crimson chakra encases Lee's body which hides the fact that he is even human at this point, his facial expression becomes fierce and angry looking, with more canine looks, like wolf-like eyes and ears. The Jinchuuriki's skin disintegrates due to the Bijuu's chakra now being half outside of the body, covering the Jinchuuriki in a black aura of smoking dead skin and blood. The Jinchuuriki now begins to look like a miniature version of the Yonbi, forcing him to fight on all fours. Lee maintains all the abilities granted through Bijuu previously, as well as another 20% strength boost. He also grows fangs and claws that are each 2 inches long and can shred through flesh easily. The tails are like that of a wolf, the tail is normally seven feet long but once per round it can be extended to double that length (one round charge and a four round cool down). The tail can be used to attack at speeds topping 50mph and can pierce steel.

The host does not need to perform hand seals to be able to enter this second tail-beast cloak however they can't just simply choose to go into this form. At first the host can only enter this form if triggered by rage or another extremely strong emotion, however doing this means that they have no control over themselves in this form and will attack everyone around them friend and foe alike (MUST attack ally at least one time). If the host wants to be able to control their demon in cloak form they must train solo or with a single partner for 2500 words, after that they are free to not only control themselves but to use this tailed form at will. The host is able to remain in this cloaked-form for a maximum of four rounds before training to control it and they come out completely exhausted for six turns, after training they are able to stay in it for eight rounds and come out only exhausted for three turns. This form costs chakra to keep in place per post, while this is untrained it costs 20 chakra per round, however when trained it only costs ten.

Name: Scorch Release: Lee-Wolf Spin!
Canon/Custom: Custom
Type: Nintaijutsu
Element: Scorch
Distance: Self - 50ft.
Description: Requires handseals. This jutsu requires usage of the Yonbi's chakra. Expelling a portion of the Yonbi from his very body and creating a small replication of a wolf next to him with it, the two run forward while spinning at a rapid pace. They spin so fast, while rotating eachother, that they no longer look like people, and rather just a large spinning mass of red and white as thick as the user's width (from shoulder to shoulder). They can spin and fly forward at a rate of 70mph, making this especially harmful at close range. If they were to come in contact with something, they can shred through anything made of iron and dent steel up to 3 inches thick, and cause many deep lacerations in the skin as well as 3rd degree burns. The small mass of chakra and the boy can only fly forward for one post, at a maximum range of 50ft. The jutsu can be stopped at will of the user, and the solidification of Bijuu chakra will disappear. Cooldown of 7 posts.

A Rank

Name: Yonbi no Ōkami: One Pissed-Off Wolf
Canon/Custom: Custom
Type: Bijuu Chakra
Element: -
Distance: Self
Description: In the third tail, the Bijuu's bones begin to form around the Jinchuuriki, therefore forcing him to take on the posture of a wolf even more. He grows the Bijuu's right shoulder as well as spine, and the Bijuu's right arm bone outside of his own (All having the consistency of normal bone). The Jinchuuriki also grows fur in this form, and is boosted again one rank in Taijutsu. He maintains all abilities granted by the Bijuu innately as well as in the previous tails. The tails are like that of a wolf, the tail is normally fifteen feet long but once per round it can be extended to double that length (one round charge and a four round cool down). The tail can be used to attack at speeds topping 50mph and can pierce titanium.

The host does not need to perform hand seals to be able to enter this second tail-beast cloak however they can't just simply choose to go into this form. At first the host can only enter this form if triggered by rage or another extremely strong emotion, however doing this means that they have no control over themselves in this form and will attack everyone around them friend and foe alike (MUST attack ally at least one time). If the host wants to be able to control their demon in cloak form they must train solo or with a single partner for 3500 words, after that they are free to not only control themselves but to use this tailed form at will. The host is able to remain in this cloaked-form for a maximum of four rounds before training to control it and they come out completely exhausted for six turns, after training they are able to stay in it for eight rounds and come out only exhausted for three turns. This form costs chakra to keep in place per post, while this is untrained it costs 30 chakra per round, however when trained it only costs 15.

S Rank

Name: Yonbi no Ōkami: The Wolf Emerges
Canon/Custom: Custom
Type: Bijuu Chakra
Element: -
Distance: Self
Description: At full release, the Jinchuuriki becomes the Bijuu itself (or at full-mastery gains all the same abilities while maintaining human form), giving him a 120% total strength boost, and making him give off a flaming aura that gives 1st degree burns to any being within a 10 foot radius of it. He also maintains his 20% speed/reaction boost from earlier. He is now boosted to a toal of 80% more Taijutsu prowess. His claws and fangs can now rip through steel with ease. The tails are like that of a wolf, the tail is normally seven feet long but once per round it can be extended to double that length (one round charge and a four round cool down). The tail can be used to attack at speeds topping 60mph and can pierce titanium.

The host does not need to perform hand seals to be able to enter this second tail-beast cloak however they can't just simply choose to go into this form. At first the host can only enter this form if triggered by rage or another extremely strong emotion, however doing this means that they have no control over themselves in this form and will attack everyone around them friend and foe alike (MUST attack ally at least one time). If the host wants to be able to control their demon in cloak form they must enter the encagement of the Bijuu in their mind, fight it, and kill it, after that they are free to not only control themselves but to use this tailed form at will. The host is able to remain in this cloaked-form for a maximum of four rounds before training to control it and they come out completely exhausted and die soon after, after training it, the Jinchuuriki has fully mastered the Bijuu itself; they are able to stay in it for ten rounds and come out only exhausted for one turn. This form costs chakra to keep in place per post, while this is untrained it costs 20 chakra per round, however when trained it costs nothing.


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PostSubject: Re: [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration]   [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration] I_icon_minitimeSat Sep 15, 2012 8:55 pm

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Dominic Edrick
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PostSubject: Re: [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration]   [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration] I_icon_minitimeSat Sep 15, 2012 9:03 pm

A bit later, we can phone convo these techs. I'll make my points much quicker that way.
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PostSubject: Re: [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration]   [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration] I_icon_minitimeSat Sep 15, 2012 9:25 pm

Alrighty
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PostSubject: Re: [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration]   [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration] I_icon_minitimeSat Sep 15, 2012 11:02 pm

Ok. We officially spoke on the phone. I'm posting this so that if I am not available, someone else can appraise. Just bump when you have made the edits we discussed.
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PostSubject: Re: [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration]   [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration] I_icon_minitimeSat Sep 15, 2012 11:23 pm

Alright here's a bump, I edited everything Dom told me to do. For whomever goes over this with me next, just moderate all of them except for the second D-rank tech, as I have to research that one before I post the final result up.
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PostSubject: Re: [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration]   [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration] I_icon_minitimeSat Sep 15, 2012 11:35 pm

Approved
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PostSubject: Re: [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration]   [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration] I_icon_minitimeSun Sep 16, 2012 6:34 pm

[Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration] Jutsutemplate

Name: Scorch Release Armor
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: S
Type: Nintaijutsu
Element: Scorch
Distance: Self
Description: Requires charging equal to handseals at this rank. The user pours Scorch chakra to every cell in their body, and in one drastic push, expells all of the chakra to the outside of the body, creating a thick layer of Scorch chakra around the skin. The user of this jutsu simply appears to be flaming, but much more is actually going on. This jutsu is was created by a Scorch Release shinobi after studying the Lightning Release Armor, which is its sister jutsu. It is not quite as powerful, due to it not being the original, but it is a very close customization. Speed and reaction during the duration of this jutsu are boosted by 100%, and the flames surrounding the user give off such an intense heat, that any flesh the user touches instantly melts to the bone, but not through the bone. This jutsu can also melt anything with the durability of iron or less. The last offensive property of this jutsu gives the user a 20% boost in Taijutsu prowess. This armor also has some defensive capabilities. Wind jutsu is nullified up through rank A, and Fire is nullified through S rank. This lasts for 8 rounds of posting, and can only be used once a week. Using ice or water jutsu, someone can attempt to extinguish this armor. Using a full A rank jutsu twice as fast as possible on this armor (non-area of effect jutsu), the opponent can "put out" the armor, nulling all the effects. Using an S rank, it can be done in one use. This jutsu cannot be used while in any tailed form of the Bijuu. As far as chakra use goes, this jutsu costs 50 to activate. While in effect, for every round after the 3rd, the user must expend 10 chakra. (This means, to fully use this jutsu, the 100 chakra will be spent). While in this form, the user can only use a single ninjutsu, after that it's strictly hand-to-hand combat.


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PostSubject: Re: [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration]   [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration] I_icon_minitimeMon Sep 17, 2012 1:27 am

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PostSubject: Re: [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration]   [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration] I_icon_minitimeMon Sep 17, 2012 2:04 am

I think putting out of the armor in general should no only take away the armor, but also the speed and tai boost seeing as it would be really lucky for someone to hit you with 2 A-ranks in a row. Edit that and I think its fine
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PostSubject: Re: [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration]   [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration] I_icon_minitimeMon Sep 17, 2012 8:57 am

It also won't be available to be used with any tailed beast mode you have. You enter tails form, this should be locked.
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PostSubject: Re: [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration]   [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration] I_icon_minitimeMon Sep 17, 2012 9:16 am

Very good points brought up from both of you, and so it has been fixed.

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PostSubject: Re: [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration]   [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration] I_icon_minitimeMon Sep 17, 2012 9:40 am

The last thing I see, is that it needs to cost more than 50 chakra. after the third post duration it should cost 10 chakra per round after. Meaning it could total up to 100 chakra for full use.
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PostSubject: Re: [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration]   [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration] I_icon_minitimeMon Sep 17, 2012 9:53 am

Le bump
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PostSubject: Re: [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration]   [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration] I_icon_minitimeMon Sep 17, 2012 10:10 am

20,000 Ryo. If you add that you can only use one single ninjutsu while in this form, the price will come down.
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PostSubject: Re: [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration]   [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration] I_icon_minitimeMon Sep 17, 2012 10:46 am

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PostSubject: Re: [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration]   [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration] I_icon_minitimeMon Sep 17, 2012 2:11 pm

New price, 15,000 ryo
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PostSubject: Re: [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration]   [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration] I_icon_minitimeMon Sep 17, 2012 8:48 pm

I'm buying this and deducting the Ryo from Rohim
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PostSubject: Re: [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration]   [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration] I_icon_minitimeMon Sep 17, 2012 9:01 pm

Rohim had the same ryo this morning when I took out Ai's for her jutsu. He has the same now. Did you not deduct it? This every account deal doin the staff work is not working for me. You need to atleast show the amount change and the account your using.
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PostSubject: Re: [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration]   [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration] I_icon_minitimeMon Sep 17, 2012 9:35 pm

Ryo deducted from Rohim after apparent internet issues.
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PostSubject: Re: [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration]   [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration] I_icon_minitimeSun Oct 07, 2012 2:02 am

[Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration] Jutsutemplate

Name: Galactic Close -Line
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Distance: Arm's Reach
Description: This jutsu is passive. Lee has developed this jutsu through his extensive training in the many mixed martial arts of Taijutsu. He can either intercept an opponent with this Taijutsu move, or run at a target and his them with it. All the happens is Lee holds out his arm to the side and locks it in place. Then, he can catch the neck of his target and cause damage depending on what cloak of his Bijuu he is in.

No Bijuu release: This move only causes the target to get flung backwards to the ground. No other damage occurs other than bruising to the neck and the back of the skull.

Chakra Cloak: This move causes the target to gasp for breath and choke momentarily after getting hit, along with being flung to the ground. Bruising still occurs.

First Tail: Causes severe choking and short lapse of breath, along with being flung to the ground. Bruising still occurs.

Second Tail: Causes the target to not be able to breath for appr. 2 seconds, making them immobile for that alotted time, along with being flung to the ground. Bruising still occurs.

Third Tail: Causes the target to not breath for 4 seconds, making them immobile for that alotted time, along with being flung to the ground. Can pierce neck skin and cause very slight bleeding along with the bruising, and causes microscopic fractures to occur on the back of the skull.

Fourth Tail: Causes the target to not be able to breath for 8 seconds, making them immobile for one post and the time alotted, along with being flung to the ground. Causes more noticeable bleeding in the throat, making the target cough up blood. Causes the back of the skull to crack.

Cooldown of 6 posts.
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PostSubject: Re: [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration]   [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration] I_icon_minitimeSun Oct 07, 2012 2:07 am

looks fine to me, 7000 ryo
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PostSubject: Re: [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration]   [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration] I_icon_minitimeMon Oct 15, 2012 2:09 am

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Name: Scorch Style: Half-Baked
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Scorch
Distance: 30 yards out and up in a 45 degree angle in front of the user
Description: Requires charging equal to handseals at this rank. After charging the proper amount of chakra into the mouth, the caster takes a hit from any smoking product (cigarette, cigar, weed, etc). Upon inhaling, the smoke is instantaneously infused with the scorch chakra and transformed into extreme heat in the mouth. The heat is then exhaled out into the dimensions mentioned above (The caster must keep their head still/pointing in one direction while casting this jutsu), this exhalation must take at least a second. Upon closing the mouth and cutting off the flow of heat from the chakra in the mouth, the cloud of heat explodes into fire. This heat cloud expands from the user's mouth at a speed of 50mph. If caught in the explosion, any material lower grade then steel is melted, any skin is burned to the 2nd degree, and any higher-grade material is set aflame, but can easily be put out with a hand, dirt, or any other minor means of snuffing fire. If not put out, this fire lasts for a single post afterward, but causes no damage to the material after it goes out or is put out. 7 round cooldown.


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PostSubject: Re: [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration]   [Akuma, Lee/ Jutsu Registration] I_icon_minitimeMon Oct 15, 2012 2:50 am

what is the minimum amount of time you have to keep your mouth open and thus keep it as heat. At a B rank this needs to be at least one to two seconds just to make it not an auto hit but otherwise looks fine besides the cool. just up it to about 7 and itll be square
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