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PostSubject: [Lag / Jutsu Registration]   Mon Mar 26, 2012 4:29 am

Advanced Element

Element: Shōton (Crystal ReElease)
Description: As a clanless ninja, you have been given the chance to pick from an advanced element of your choosing. This element cannot be taken away from you. Keep in mind, advanced elements work the same as basic elements. They have those they are strong against, and those they are weak against. Resort to the Naruto Elemental Scale witin the Jutsu Creation for the breakdown.



D Rank

Name: Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Blade
Canon/Custom: Canon
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Shōton
Distance: User's Wrist
Description: Charge time equal to hand seals; the user focuses Shoton chakra into one, or both of their wrist(s) and after the charge time has been completed the user forms a blade the length of their forearm made of crystal on their wrist, this blade is as strong as steel. If the user wishes to make a blade on both wrists they only need to pay an additional 10 chakra when it is used. 4 Round cool down.

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Name: Crystal Release: Hexagonal Shuriken
Canon/Custom: Canon
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Shōton
Distance: -
Description: Hand Seals; the user creates shuriken made of crystal in their hands, these shuriken are six-sided with spikes at the sides of each blade, resembling snowflakes. The user can create up to six shuriken per use, each as strong as steel and able to pierce into iron one and a half inches or a human body up to three inches. As part of the technique the user can use chakra to enhance their throwing speed so that it reaches 60mph. 4 round cool down.

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Name: Lightning Release: Piercing Swallow
Canon/Custom: Custom
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton
Distance: Close to Medium
Description: After hand seals have been completed the user places his palms together and slowly pulls them apart to condense raw lightning chakra into the form of a swallow, this bird is the size of an average swallow bird. The bird moves between 30-40 mph. After it's creation the bird acts freely and can fly as a normal bird of this kind with only one addition. The bird, when it flies into something, can create an electric shock that leaves a second degree electrical burn. The bird lasts either 3 turns or until it rams into something.

C Rank

Name: Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Mirror
Canon/Custom: Canon
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Shōton
Distance: -
Description: Hand seals; the user creates a jade-tinted mirror in front of them composed of transparent and green crystals. This mirror has a diameter equal to the height of it's user and is shaped with six prongs jutting out with thorns on each similar to a snowflake. The mirror is as strong as titanium and is used to perform the Jade Crystal Clone Technique. These mirrors are able to be broken by B rank techniques. The technique has no other uses and lasts until either the user disperses it or it is shattered by another person. 5 round cool down.

Name: Lightning Beast Running Technique
Canon/Custom: Canon
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton
Distance: 50 feet
Description: Hand Seals; the user creates a hound composed of lightning chakra standing four feet tall at the shoulder. This beast is connected to a leash also made of lightning chakra held in the user's hand that allows them to control it but prevents the user from doing hand seals for the duration of the technique. The hound is able to run around at the user's command for the length of it's leash (50 feet) at a max speed of 30 mph, when it hits something it can either explode and cause second degree electrical burns to everything within five feet of it, or try to maul them with it's claws and fangs which paralyze for a round on contact and can cut through iron. The maximum number of rounds this hound can remain is three, after that it automatically explodes and then dissipates. 5 round cool down.

Name: Raiton: Raikyuu ( Lightning Ball )
Canon/Custom: Canon
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton
Distance: 120 feet
Description: Requires Handseals. The user will create a large, 3 feet in diameter, ball of lightning in their hands. This ball can then be launched at a target and will travel at 5 mph, as fast as an average running person. When it comes in contact with something, it will burst, damaging and shocking anyone it touches and also slightly shocking anyone within three feet of its edge at the moment of impact. Direct hit may cause the opponent hefty burning damage as if hit by a lightning bolt. Outer damage from being close, can cause a very uncomfortable sensation as well as light numbness. The ball causes 3rd degree electrical burns and for three posts the area affected will feel numb, and be reduced in skill by 20%. 3 post cooldown.

B Rank

Name: Jade Crystal Clone Technique
Canon/Custom: Canon
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Shōton
Distance: Clone Technique
Description: The user stands in front of the mirror created by Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Mirror for one post and charges chakra while holding a ram hand seal, after the charge time the user will have successfully copied their image into the mirror and can then begin making clones. Only two clones can be made per round but the user can make clones for up to four rounds or until the mirror is destroyed. These clones have the reflective property most crystal release techniques have which makes them impossible for even the most advanced sensor techniques to distinguish them from the original. These clones are as strong as double reinforced steel and have 40 chakra each to use on crystal techniques (can not use this chakra on any other element). When this technique ends it shatters the mirror but the clones remain until destroyed or they run out of chakra.

Name: Chikyū no yumi (地球のボウ - Earth Bow)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Doton
Distance: 200 feet
Description: Hand Seals; after completion of the final seal the user holds out their hand and dark brown and black chakra form out to make a composite longbow made of stone. The strong is made of the chakra itself and can only be pulled back by the user, upon drawing back this string a chakra arrow is formed. When the arrow is fired it solidifies, this is done by releasing the string which launches the missal at a speed of 50 mph and will go a maximum of two hundred feet before turning back into chakra and fading (this arrow can NOT turn around, it can only go forward). If the arrow makes contact with something it explodes into a shower of shrapnel with enough force to fracture bones and slice flesh, the shrapnel is shot out 20 feet from impact but the bone breaking only applies if it hits someone. When the arrow explodes it becomes about twenty shards of one to two inch shrapnel that each weight around fifteen pounds. Only one arrow can be fired per round and the technique lasts 5 rounds. Twice per topic with a ten post cool down.

A Rank

Name: Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Labyrinth Technique
Canon/Custom: Canon
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Shōton
Distance: 100 foot radius
Description: Hand Seals; the user completes their hand seals and holds still for a second as their Shōton chakra is released into the ground. After the second has passed the technique is locked in place and the user is free to move about like normal. When the chakra has been planted in the ground there is another one second delay but after that crystal flowers start to quickly sprout to cover the majority of the area from where the user stood when planting the chakra and 100 feet out from that point, these flowers are easy enough to shatter (85% the strength of iron) but doing so will no stop the technique. These flowers into a gigantic labyrinth consisting of red crystals and no exit. Enemies trapped inside it will mostly be lost because of the fact that the red crystals reflect their personal image as well as generates mirror images of the routes, paths, and details within the labyrinth, confusing and intimidating them. It is even capable of confusing the Byakugan and other powerful sensor techniques because of its reflective nature. Due to the crystals being full of the user's chakra they are able to easily navigate the halls of the labyrinth and track down foreign chakra (anything alive that isnt them). Because of the crystal's stable molecular structure, a simple attack focused at one point is rendered useless, and its wide surface will disperse the force of wide range attacks, reducing their effectiveness. To overcome this technique, an attack that has impact force both wide and powerful enough to smash through reinforced titanium is required to break through it. This structure lasts until destroyed or dispersed by the user. Once per topic.

S Rank

Name: Chapter Black
Canon/Custom: Custom
Type: Genjutsu
Element: n/a
Distance: Touch
Description: The user charges chakra into their palm for the same amount of time they would normally perform seals for a S rank jutsu in place of doing hand seals. After charging is completed the user places their hand on the victim's forehead and the affected person's body goes limp for the remaining duration of this technique, in addition the user can't removed their hand from the forehead or the technique ends early. In addition the user can not use any force against the victim during this technique, meaning they can't use other techniques weapons or even their fists to strike them or the jutsu is ended early.

When the victim's body goes limp their brain kicks into overdrive, showing them a reel of images known only as "Chapter Black". Chapter Black is like a rapid paced slide show of all kinds of human cruelty. Things like brutal war where men are tearing flesh from each other's bodies with their bare hands, children being forced to watch their mother being raped while helpless to stop it and every other kind of unimaginable dark lust of mankind. This "video" is the thing of legend and is known to be a last resort measure or torture and interrogation developed by the first warlord, Sensō Kinzoku. As such the fear surrounding this technique has made it something of a ghost story that scares people just at the thought of being forced to watch it play through all across the globe.

When the technique starts the visions are of murder and other gruesome but normally semi-tolerated crimes. If the user removes their hand after one round then the mental damage is minor, sending the victim into shock which makes them scared for the rest of the topic and unable to stop thinking about what they saw so they move at half speed.

By the time the second round of being held comes around the visions become crimes that many people don't think would ever be committed, everything from sexual taboos to dissection of humans and cannibalism. If after two rounds the user removes their hand then the victim's mental damage is moderately high, enough to be considered mental disease on short term. They still see flashes of these visions in the back of their mind even after the jutsu ends for the rest of the topic and the topic after. Their speed is halved for the rest of the topic.

If the user does not release their hand by the time it has been there three rounds then the effects of this visions are at full power. The victim sees things that a human mind is unable to comprehend, they lose their faith in humankind and go completely insane by being shown just how low a human is able to go. They drop to the ground for two posts foaming at the mouth and gurgling hysterically, the visions are all they can see during these two posts as they permanently implant themselves on the victim's mental eye. The insanity effect is permanent, it doesn't make them unable to move or function but their mentality is shattered. The visions return every time the victim is near the user (even after the topic it was used in ends), this causes the speed drop from fear caused at the lower level damages of this technique but it will not make them pass out again unless for some reason they have it used on them again.

This jutsu, even though a genjutsu, is not able to be broken by Genjutsu Kai as it's sheer power is to immense. This can only be broken by primary genjutsu users, this is done by expending an extremely large amount of chakra into one's brain, the exact number of chakra is 100 points. The victim must charge this chakra for one round after they are trapped (meaning they are able to end it before they enter stage two) for it to surge up enough to counter the jutsu. Once per topic use.


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PostSubject: Re: [Lag / Jutsu Registration]   Mon Mar 26, 2012 7:46 pm

All canon jutsu are approved
Piercing Swallow approved
D Rank Crystal Techs approved
S Rank genjutsu is approved

What can break the crystal mirrors?

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PostSubject: Re: [Lag / Jutsu Registration]   Mon Mar 26, 2012 7:51 pm

Lag wrote:
The mirror is as strong as titanium

since its an advanced element idk what kind of technique could break it since it doesnt have a weakness that is known but I can add in that B rank techniques can break it. 9higher rank once again since advanced elements are powerful)
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PostSubject: Re: [Lag / Jutsu Registration]   Mon Mar 26, 2012 7:59 pm

Ok, seems legit

All the other techs look good to me.

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PostSubject: Re: [Lag / Jutsu Registration]   Mon Mar 26, 2012 8:01 pm

Alright I edited in the durability of the mirrors

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PostSubject: Re: [Lag / Jutsu Registration]   Mon Mar 26, 2012 8:10 pm

Approved

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PostSubject: Re: [Lag / Jutsu Registration]   Mon Mar 26, 2012 11:12 pm

Name: Crystal Release: Giant Hexagonal Shuriken
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Shōton
Distance: -
Description: Hand Seals; the user creates a gigantic shuriken 3 feet across made of crystal in their hand, this shuriken is six-sided with spikes at the sides of each blade, resembling an over-sized snowflake. The user can create up to two shuriken per use, each as strong as titanium and able to pierce into steel three inches or a human body up to twelve inches. As part of the technique the user uses chakra to enhance their throwing speed so that it reaches 60mph when launched from their hand. 6 round cool down.

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PostSubject: Re: [Lag / Jutsu Registration]   Thu Apr 19, 2012 5:49 pm

Looks good, 6000 ryo

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PostSubject: Re: [Lag / Jutsu Registration]   Sun Apr 22, 2012 3:57 am

I'll go ahead and take it now then, ryo deducted

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PostSubject: Re: [Lag / Jutsu Registration]   Sun Sep 16, 2012 9:40 am

Name: Tenjin (Heaven Blade)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton
Distance: Touch
Description: Charge equal to hand seals. To charge this technique the user grabs their wrist and thrusts large amount of chakra into the palm and fingers, effectively coating them in the raiton element that sometimes creates small sparks by the time it is complete. In addition to the thin coating of raiton chakra this technique produces a 'blade' of chakra from the inner wrist that extends out six inches further than the user's fully extended middle finger in length. When the charging phase is complete the user is free to use this 'blade' of chakra on their hand like a weapon of varying sharpness levels. The technique lasts for three posts total, starting with the ability to cut through titanium cleanly and then losing bits of this power as time goes on. Only being able to cut steel by the second post and iron by the third before it fades away. The jutsu, however, is unable to kill a person after the first round it is active and even then they would have to stab into a heavily vital area like the heart or brain otherwise it only causes injury. In addition to this all cuts made by the technique are instantly cauterized on flesh. 8 round cool down, twice per topic.

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PostSubject: Re: [Lag / Jutsu Registration]   Sun Sep 16, 2012 11:39 am

The picture addition really helped. High cooldown and limited use more than make up for damage aspect. Therefore the price is pretty standard for B Rank. 7,000 ryo.

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