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Neji Hitogumo
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Neji Hitogumo


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PostSubject: The Spider Cuirass   The Spider Cuirass I_icon_minitimeMon Apr 09, 2012 11:04 pm

The Spider Cuirass Armortemplate

Name: The Spider Cuirass
Type: Light Cuirass
Quantity: 1
Description: A light cuirass with the emblem of the Hitogumo clan on the front of it. The armor is made of composite Hitogumo web and iron, making it stronger than steel, yet light at the same time to not impede the users movement. There is a cape on the back under the shoulder plates and a hood attached to the cape.
Abilities: The ability to hide Neji's extra arms when not in combat.
Durability: The armor is composite iron and Hitogumo web, which is as strong as steel, thus making the armor as durable as triple reinforced steel. This means anything capable of slicing through triple reinforced steel can slice through the armor. The armor is weak to Katon jutsu in particular, mainly because of the web mixed into the iron, allowing a B-Rank Katon technique to burn through the armor with ease.
History: A cuirass that was made custom for the founder of the Hitogumo Clan by a specialized blacksmith. He took web from the founder and iron and forged them together to make a composite substance harder than steel, but still relativity light. The founder was ecstatic when he received his gift that he wore it in every fight he was in. He never lose until the day he forgot to wear it in battle. He was buried in it to ensure that nobody else could harness its power. Neji found his tomb and took the armor that was rightfully his as heir of the Hitogumo family.
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Dominic Edrick
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Dominic Edrick


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PostSubject: Re: The Spider Cuirass   The Spider Cuirass I_icon_minitimeTue Apr 10, 2012 7:49 pm

Your durability is too vague. Your going to need to be specific with it on here. Give me the exact breakdown of the durability.
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Neji Hitogumo
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Neji Hitogumo


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PostSubject: Re: The Spider Cuirass   The Spider Cuirass I_icon_minitimeTue Apr 10, 2012 8:01 pm

The armor is composite iron and hitogumo web which is as strong as steel, thus making the armor as durable as triple reinforced steel.
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Dominic Edrick
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PostSubject: Re: The Spider Cuirass   The Spider Cuirass I_icon_minitimeTue Apr 10, 2012 8:12 pm

Neji Hitogumo wrote:
The armor can withstand hits from B+ rank jutsu and weapons.

This is what you have though, which is a no. You need to make some adjustments to the armor as a whole. Make me a full description of the durability and bump
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Neji Hitogumo
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Neji Hitogumo


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PostSubject: Re: The Spider Cuirass   The Spider Cuirass I_icon_minitimeTue Apr 10, 2012 8:34 pm

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Neji Hitogumo
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Neji Hitogumo


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PostSubject: Re: The Spider Cuirass   The Spider Cuirass I_icon_minitimeThu Apr 12, 2012 10:14 pm

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Dominic Edrick
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PostSubject: Re: The Spider Cuirass   The Spider Cuirass I_icon_minitimeThu Apr 12, 2012 11:03 pm

You still need to state what jutsu can weaken it, along with stating that weapons with Sharpness higher than triple reinforced steel can tear through it.
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Neji Hitogumo
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Neji Hitogumo


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PostSubject: Re: The Spider Cuirass   The Spider Cuirass I_icon_minitimeThu Apr 12, 2012 11:13 pm

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Haru Satsujin
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PostSubject: Re: The Spider Cuirass   The Spider Cuirass I_icon_minitimeTue Apr 17, 2012 8:23 pm

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Dominic Edrick
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PostSubject: Re: The Spider Cuirass   The Spider Cuirass I_icon_minitimeTue Apr 17, 2012 8:35 pm

Dominic Edrick wrote:
You still need to state what jutsu can weaken it, along with stating that weapons with Sharpness higher than triple reinforced steel can tear through it.

Did you seriously not see this?
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Haru Satsujin
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PostSubject: Re: The Spider Cuirass   The Spider Cuirass I_icon_minitimeTue Apr 17, 2012 8:37 pm

Did you not see this?

This means anything capable of slicing through triple reinforced steel can slice through the armor. The armor is weak to Katon jutsu in particular, mainly because of the web mixed into the iron, allowing a B-Rank Katon technique to burn through the armor with ease.
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Dominic Edrick
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PostSubject: Re: The Spider Cuirass   The Spider Cuirass I_icon_minitimeWed Apr 18, 2012 8:05 am

Yeah, that wasn't there when I typed that. Believe me, I wouldn't do that if the durability section was that long. Did you have this bought previously?
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Renga Zakii
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PostSubject: Re: The Spider Cuirass   The Spider Cuirass I_icon_minitimeWed Apr 18, 2012 5:11 pm

Yeah, this armor was mine, and that was there. I paid 10000 for it
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Dominic Edrick
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PostSubject: Re: The Spider Cuirass   The Spider Cuirass I_icon_minitimeWed Apr 18, 2012 6:19 pm

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