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Ravine Tokubetsu Jōnin
Posts : 28 Ryo : 8700
Ninja Info Card Chakra: (240/240)
| Subject: [Ravine/ Jutsu registration] Thu Mar 22, 2012 6:57 am | |
| Academy Jutsu - Spoiler:
Name: Bunshin No Jutsu Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: None Distance: - Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu No Jutsu Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: None Distance: - Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
Name: Henge no Jutsu Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: None Distance: - Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: None Distance: - Description: This jutsu gives you the ability to easily free yourself from a rope or any other object made from something similar to a rope. This jutsu works merely by inserting chakra into the rope, and requires no hand seals.
Name: Kakuremino no Jutsu Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: None Distance: - Description: Either prior to or right after the use of this jutsu, the user hides themselves, often by means of hiding behind a cloak, in a bush, or such. Afterwards, they used their chakra to make them camouflage better with their environment. If the user is not hidden well, this has no effect, however, it can make a user that is well hidden, or beneath a cloak that is very close in appearance to their surroundings become almost invisible to anyone at a distance, though it's more obvious at 10 feet or closer that they're hiding. Medical Ninjutsu - Spoiler:
Name: Chakra Scalpel Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: D Type: Ijutsu Element: None Distance: Short Description: A more advanced medical jutsu that is used as a blade during surgery, so the skin does not have to be cut, and surgery can be performed simply without having to wait for external wounds to heal after the procedure is over. Used for surgical procedures, however this can be used in battle also. When their charged hands reach the body of their target, they can extend the chakra internally into the targets body to cut and neatly slice their muscles and blood vessels without harming the surface skin. This technique can be used in battle, but because of its hectic nature, the fine precision required for an instant kill is not feasible. Damage can still be done to the vital organs, but the technique should be used carefully in battle. The technique uses 10 chakara points per post for a maximum of 10 posts (maximum normally used for medical procedures)
Name: Heal Bite Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: D Type: Ijutsu Element: None Distance: Bite Description: By having others bite into her skin and suck out her chakra, Ravine can heal other's wounds. This ability has been shown to heal minor injuries in a short period of time, and is capable of quickly energizing those Ravine heals. Ravine is left with a permanent bite mark every time she uses it. They need to bite down for 1 post for a total minor healing. There will also be a 5% increase in the speed/reaction due to the surge of chakra that lasts for 4 posts. This technique needs a 3 post cooldown.
Name: Nurse Fingers Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: C Type: Ijutsu Element: None Distance: Short Description: The user performs handseals. Her hands then transform into medical apparatus. Her fingers change their appearance and take the form of syringe, giving her 10 needles instead of 10 fingers. This jutsu is primarily used for medical purposes, giving the medic instant injections for instant aide. But this jutsu can also be used for offense, the user can use the syringes as some form of claws or blades. This jutsu can also be used for long range attacks as any liquid can be forced out of the needles. The needles' length are about twice to thrice the length of the user's actual fingers are and they are as stern as the steel used for making swords. The drawback of this jutsu is that the user can not hold or grab onto things as her fingers are temporarily made into needles.
Name: Chaotic Mental Collision Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: A Type: Ijutsu Element: None Distance: Touch Description: Allows the user to muddle with the signals sent to the brain by injecting electrical pulses into the nervous system through any chakra point on the victim. As a result, mixed messages are sent from the brain to the limbs of the victim, such as different portions of the brain functioning incorrectly, thus causing confusion and making the body doing something unintentional.
Lasts for five posts Medical Specialist - seven post
Name: Strength of a hundred Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: S Type: Ijutsu Element: None Distance: Self Description: This is a forbidden technique which facilitates the regeneration of injuries through accelerated cell division — it however does not require the use of hand seals, meaning Ravine's wounds begin to heal as soon as they are inflicted. Any wound sustained while this technique is in effect will begin recovery automatically. The enhanced regeneration granted by this technique is so advance that even a gigantic sword wound to her abdomen would completely heal in mere moments. Use of the technique requires the release of the Yin Seal, but rather than just covering the face, the markings extend over the user's entire body. As a testament to both its power and difficulty, only medical-nin who have mastered this technique are permitted to break the first three rules that govern their role on the battlefield: 1st: "No medic ninja shall ever stop medical treatment until the lives of their party members have come to an end." 2nd: "No medic ninja shall ever stand on the front lines." 3rd: "No medic ninja shall ever die until they are the last of their platoon."
Ninjutsu - Spoiler:
Name: Needle Hell Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Element: None Distance: Mid-Long Range Description: After using Needle Jizō, extending his hair around his body, the user shoots multiple hardened needle-like hair towards the enemy.
Name: Needle Jizo Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: None Distance: Self Description: This is a technique where the user encases themselves in a countless number of sharp needles, but in truth, the spikes are the user's hair. Chakra grants the strands of hair the hardness and shape of needles, endowed with a capacity to injure and kill on par with that of metallic weapons. In addition, if activated in response to an opponent's attack, it can also be used as a counter. The hair is made hard enough that it can withstand blows from certain types of projectile weapons and could stop taijutsu moves.
Name: Yin Seal: Release Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: C Type: Fuinjutsu Element: None Distance: Self Description: The Yin Seal: Release is a powerful sealing technique used by Ravine. Over a period of time, Ravine will focus and build up chakra in the seal mark on her forehead. The release command will disperse the seal and allow the stored chakra to pump back into her body. She can store chakra to perform the Strength of a Hundred Technique on herself and heal a vast amount of people. Ravine loses 5 chakra points every post, but gains 15 in return for focusing the chakra on her forehead. For every topic, it automatically activates and starts the beneficial loss.
Name: Octopus Barrier Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: None Distance: Self - Mid Description: Ravine creates a spherical dome around her that protects her from projectiles and jutsu up until C rank. This translucent sphere has tentacles which Ravine could mentally control which could be used to grab and throw things. Ravine uses this mostly when she is healing her comrades and to escape tightl situations.
Name: Mind's Eye Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: B Type: Sensory Element: None Distance: up to 10 kilometers Description: This ability allows Ravine to find, sense, and track individuals through their chakra over vast range that exceeds ten kilometres. This is done by focusing and opening the mind's eye, though Ravine has it active often. The ability extends to telling when a person is lying from the fluctuations in a person's chakra made from dishonest emotions or detecting if someone, including herself, is under a genjutsu. Also by focusing on a particular chakra Ravine can perceive its location and movement with great detail.
Name: Wild Lion's Mane Canon/Custom: Canon/Custom Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: None Distance: Short - Long Description: This technique uses chakra to temporarily enhance the head's metabolism and manipulate the hair that grows longer as a result of it. There is also chakra flowing through the lengthened hair, making its hardness comparable to that of steel wire. By thickly bundling the hair, its strength is further increased, also increasing its destructive power. It's brute strength could crush steel and create a defensive wall by compressing the users hair.
Last edited by Ravine on Sun Apr 01, 2012 4:41 am; edited 5 times in total | |
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Ravine Tokubetsu Jōnin
Posts : 28 Ryo : 8700
Ninja Info Card Chakra: (240/240)
| Subject: Re: [Ravine/ Jutsu registration] Thu Mar 22, 2012 6:58 am | |
| *Note: There are 12 jutsu here... 10 from the free i get... 1 i crossed over from mirage. "Level C jutsu: Nurse Fingers"
So there are a total of 11 jutsu here that are not paid, but instead of having 3 C rank jutsu to avail. I just made one D and one B. I hope I just pay the B jutsu in half, or whatever the verdict may be.
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Haru Satsujin S-Rank
Posts : 276 Ryo : 3500
Ninja Info Card Chakra: (320/320)
| Subject: Re: [Ravine/ Jutsu registration] Thu Mar 22, 2012 10:06 am | |
| If the S Rank is Tsunades forehead seal its denied, thats being made into a special case. | |
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Raleth Sannin
Posts : 214 Ryo : 6150
Ninja Info Card Chakra: (320/320)
| Subject: Re: [Ravine/ Jutsu registration] Thu Mar 22, 2012 10:16 am | |
| If I may interject I feel a staff discussion would be great since the mitoric regeneration was a purposes special case, and now that someone wants it we can go through the approval process. | |
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Haru Satsujin S-Rank
Posts : 276 Ryo : 3500
Ninja Info Card Chakra: (320/320)
| Subject: Re: [Ravine/ Jutsu registration] Thu Mar 22, 2012 10:22 am | |
| Its not even close to being Mitoric Regeneration, I'm going to continue my jutsu review, so we'll bring in everyone once Im done with my initial review | |
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Shitai Tokubetsu Jōnin
Posts : 221 Ryo : 2500
Ninja Info Card Chakra: (250/250)
| Subject: Re: [Ravine/ Jutsu registration] Thu Mar 22, 2012 3:41 pm | |
| D 5, C 4, B 3, A 2, S 1. This is the count I got from reading this over not including academy techniques. Please not that even with your needle finger technique taking off one of your C ranks from that count you are still over the limit on everything but C and S rank so adjust this list. Also Strength of a Hundred is a jutsu derived from Ninja Art: Mitotic Regeneration meaning that one must first have the parent jutsu to use it so denied for now. | |
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Ravine Tokubetsu Jōnin
Posts : 28 Ryo : 8700
Ninja Info Card Chakra: (240/240)
| Subject: Re: [Ravine/ Jutsu registration] Sun Mar 25, 2012 3:18 am | |
| I'll just remove the mystic palm from the free jutsu and purchase it... Then if i do that, is everything gonna be okay? | |
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Takeshi Hebikage
Posts : 615 Ryo : 22500
Ninja Info Card Chakra: (320/320)
| Subject: Re: [Ravine/ Jutsu registration] Sun Mar 25, 2012 3:32 am | |
| you would still be one d rank over | |
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Dominic Edrick Shiokage
Posts : 971 Ryo : 64600
Ninja Info Card Chakra: (410/410)
| Subject: Re: [Ravine/ Jutsu registration] Sun Mar 25, 2012 11:40 am | |
| Well first we need to establish how many of these techniques she bought on Mirage that she is allowed to keep. Did you purchase any of these techs like Chakra Scalpel and Mystical Palms while on Mirage? | |
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Shitai Tokubetsu Jōnin
Posts : 221 Ryo : 2500
Ninja Info Card Chakra: (250/250)
| Subject: Re: [Ravine/ Jutsu registration] Sun Mar 25, 2012 1:06 pm | |
| - Ravine wrote:
- *Note: There are 12 jutsu here... 10 from the free i get... 1 i crossed over from mirage.
"Level C jutsu: Nurse Fingers"
So there are a total of 11 jutsu here that are not paid, but instead of having 3 C rank jutsu to avail. I just made one D and one B. I hope I just pay the B jutsu in half, or whatever the verdict may be.
According to this she only has one C rank slot already paid for and the rest are new | |
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Ravine Tokubetsu Jōnin
Posts : 28 Ryo : 8700
Ninja Info Card Chakra: (240/240)
| Subject: Re: [Ravine/ Jutsu registration] Sun Mar 25, 2012 5:09 pm | |
| I currently have four on this list... One is already purchased. Then I should remove one (Mystical Palm) Then the count for C is only 2 instead of the free 3. But then again I have an extra D. Can I just get two D's? Or should I just remove the other D and get a new C? | |
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Dominic Edrick Shiokage
Posts : 971 Ryo : 64600
Ninja Info Card Chakra: (410/410)
| Subject: Re: [Ravine/ Jutsu registration] Sun Mar 25, 2012 5:23 pm | |
| The best bet is to just stick to the regular template. If you have a custom one, just bump up the rank from extra D, and give it more potency | |
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Ravine Tokubetsu Jōnin
Posts : 28 Ryo : 8700
Ninja Info Card Chakra: (240/240)
| Subject: Re: [Ravine/ Jutsu registration] Mon Mar 26, 2012 1:53 am | |
| Ok. I will edit now. And can I cross over some money I still have on Mirage, so I can purchase jutsu? | |
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Ravine Tokubetsu Jōnin
Posts : 28 Ryo : 8700
Ninja Info Card Chakra: (240/240)
| Subject: Re: [Ravine/ Jutsu registration] Mon Mar 26, 2012 2:02 am | |
| Name: Mystical Palm Technique Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: D-A Type: Ijutsu Element: None Distance: Short Description: Hand seals depend on rank of healing used. This medical ninjutsu allows the user to speed up the body's natural healing process by sending chakra from their hands into a wound or afflicted body part. This allows the user to heal a patient without the need for medical equipment or surgery, making it highly useful on the battlefield. It can be used to treat both external and internal injuries. It is vital to match the amount of chakra used to the severity of the affliction or injury. This requires a great amount of chakra control. Because of this, only a few highly skilled medical-nin are able to use this technique. By sending an excess amount of chakra into the patient's body, the user can overload the patient's normal circulation, trapping them in a comatose state. The use of this technique can help bring back people from any injury with a certain amount of chakra as described below.
Minor (D): 10 chakra Average(C): 20 Chakra Major(B): 30 Chakra Life Threatening(A): 40 Chakra
In order to obtain the effect of the comatose on an affected person at least two ranks higher than the needed chakra must be inserted into the body. The effects of the comatose is simple a knock out that lasts for three rounds.
* I am seperately purchasing this once I get money | |
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Dominic Edrick Shiokage
Posts : 971 Ryo : 64600
Ninja Info Card Chakra: (410/410)
| Subject: Re: [Ravine/ Jutsu registration] Mon Mar 26, 2012 5:50 am | |
| Just tell me how much you had on Mirage and I will edit your total. Now, are you finished adjusting the free techs? If so, we can begin the breakdown on those. | |
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Ravine Tokubetsu Jōnin
Posts : 28 Ryo : 8700
Ninja Info Card Chakra: (240/240)
| Subject: Re: [Ravine/ Jutsu registration] Mon Mar 26, 2012 5:56 am | |
| 4700. And yep, i think i did the adjustments.... well, except for the A and S, which I think should be special case jutsus... So I'm not sure if you could approve the others in the mean time. | |
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Takeshi Hebikage
Posts : 615 Ryo : 22500
Ninja Info Card Chakra: (320/320)
| Subject: Re: [Ravine/ Jutsu registration] Mon Mar 26, 2012 6:22 am | |
| E ranks and Chakra Scalpel approved. While your A rank on the list is not a special case the staff is reworking it since somehow we had 2 versions and both were terrible, just a big mess but we are cleaning it up for you. Note though that Mental Collision is listed officially as a raiton technique and I dont know which elements you have, this may factor in for you.
Bite - For a D rank to heal life threatening injuries is a ad to much, lets start by scaling that back a bit and going from there | |
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Ravine Tokubetsu Jōnin
Posts : 28 Ryo : 8700
Ninja Info Card Chakra: (240/240)
| Subject: Re: [Ravine/ Jutsu registration] Mon Mar 26, 2012 11:30 am | |
| I have to put Creation Rebirth as my A if I want Strength of a hundred as S. And I'm going to remove the Mental Collision because I don't have Raiton as my element.
And I need to know if Creation rebirth and Strength of a hundred could be approved for me, so I could finish the entire list
So this like makes it a bit more confusing...but other than A and S, i think the other jutsus are fine...
Also, I edited the heal bite
PS. thanks for reworking on mental collision, but for now, i think i might not need it if creation rebirth would be approved | |
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Dominic Edrick Shiokage
Posts : 971 Ryo : 64600
Ninja Info Card Chakra: (410/410)
| Subject: Re: [Ravine/ Jutsu registration] Tue Mar 27, 2012 8:33 am | |
| Heal Bite - when you say energize, does it provide a temporary boost of a particular stat to get them going or is it simply like adrenaline? It needs a cooldown (All techs will need cooldowns, so if they don't try and add them). How long do they have to bite down on your skin to get fully healed? | |
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Ravine Tokubetsu Jōnin
Posts : 28 Ryo : 8700
Ninja Info Card Chakra: (240/240)
| Subject: Re: [Ravine/ Jutsu registration] Tue Mar 27, 2012 10:29 pm | |
| Name: Heal Bite Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: D Type: Ijutsu Element: None Distance: Bite Description: By having others bite into her skin and suck out her chakra, Ravine can heal other's wounds. This ability has been shown to heal minor injuries in a short period of time, and is capable of quickly energizing those Ravine heals. Ravine is left with a permanent bite mark every time she uses it.
*I was wondering if I could like give them chakra... Or if not, a boost in speed/reaction. They will also need to bite onto me for one post. Cooldown is 3 posts. | |
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Dominic Edrick Shiokage
Posts : 971 Ryo : 64600
Ninja Info Card Chakra: (410/410)
| Subject: Re: [Ravine/ Jutsu registration] Wed Mar 28, 2012 7:12 pm | |
| Ok well if it heals, then at D Rank, it can only provide a 5% increase. You can add that in along with the bite down of one post. Once you do that, bump and I will go look. | |
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Ravine Tokubetsu Jōnin
Posts : 28 Ryo : 8700
Ninja Info Card Chakra: (240/240)
| Subject: Re: [Ravine/ Jutsu registration] Fri Mar 30, 2012 4:02 pm | |
| Name: Heal Bite Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: D Type: Ijutsu Element: None Distance: Bite Description: By having others bite into her skin and suck out her chakra, Ravine can heal other's wounds. This ability has been shown to heal minor injuries in a short period of time, and is capable of quickly energizing those Ravine heals. Ravine is left with a permanent bite mark every time she uses it. It gives the biter 10 chakra points and they need to bite down for 1 post for a minor healing. There will be 10 additional chakra points given to the biter for every post the bite extends. There will also be a 5% increase in the speed/reaction due to the surge of chakra. | |
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Dominic Edrick Shiokage
Posts : 971 Ryo : 64600
Ninja Info Card Chakra: (410/410)
| Subject: Re: [Ravine/ Jutsu registration] Fri Mar 30, 2012 5:16 pm | |
| You can't give someone extra chakra. That needs to be taken out. The 5% increase can only last for 4 posts, then it goes away.
(Sorry this seems to be taking forever. Been very busy lately.) | |
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Ravine Tokubetsu Jōnin
Posts : 28 Ryo : 8700
Ninja Info Card Chakra: (240/240)
| Subject: Re: [Ravine/ Jutsu registration] Sat Mar 31, 2012 1:26 am | |
| No need to apologize
Name: Heal Bite Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: D Type: Ijutsu Element: None Distance: Bite Description: By having others bite into her skin and suck out her chakra, Ravine can heal other's wounds. This ability has been shown to heal minor injuries in a short period of time, and is capable of quickly energizing those Ravine heals. Ravine is left with a permanent bite mark every time she uses it. They need to bite down for 1 post for a total minor healing. There will also be a 5% increase in the speed/reaction due to the surge of chakra that lasts for 4 posts. This technique needs a 3 post cooldown. | |
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Dominic Edrick Shiokage
Posts : 971 Ryo : 64600
Ninja Info Card Chakra: (410/410)
| Subject: Re: [Ravine/ Jutsu registration] Sat Mar 31, 2012 9:03 am | |
| Ok, that technique is good to go. Now just make sure you change it in the full template on the first page. Go ahead and post the next jutsu and I will get to it. | |
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