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PostSubject: Aeon Maxxie River    Aeon Maxxie River  I_icon_minitimeFri Apr 13, 2012 4:09 am



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First Name: Nate Maxxie
Last Name: River -------Alias:  Aeon
Gender: Male
Height: 5' 7"
Weight: 121
Age: 23
Birthday: May 7

Village: Oashisugakure
Rank: A rank - Jonin
Elements: Fire[Katon], Earth[Doton], Lava[Yoton]
Specializations: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Fuuinjutsu, Kenjutsu 


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Personality:J's attitude to people is cruel and distasteful. People make it seem as if J acts like he is better then anyone else but really he doesn't want to be connected to anyone else due to his life being a small wreak. J was far from being mentally crazy from the things he saw as a kid. By cutting off his emotions to the world and keeping such a serious face. When facing a person in or out of school he will quickly blurt out what that person is feeling by their expression. At times after saying that he would say that "Emotions get in the way loser." He has a great since of humor which can some times be taken as being a smartypants. he is free like the wind and doesn't really take orders from someone unless he respects them which would take a great shinobi in order to do.Even though he is a cool headed guy he can be as cold a sadistic as a serial killer when it comes to it and makes serious jokes about killing people when they get on his nerves. J is quite the arrogant, loud battle-hungry person. He can be quite impatient if he knows that there is fighting involved. Most of his free time, J trains just so that he can become an even stronger person than he already is. He personally does not mind having to do work though. It just seems like another opportunity for him to fight someone and show them his power. During missions, j does not care for his partner's opinion as long as he gets to have time for fighting. Mostly quiet no matter what situation, he would always be calm whether he was fighting, or if anything chaotic was happening. Always the type to try and talk things out as he's lazy most of the time as well. J has a grudge against other village members, he thinks they had something to do with his being and they had let him be, but he still doesn't know the true reason of his existence and how he reached the place where he stands today.not hoping for a fight but this would usually make people hate him for what he says. When he really cant stand a person he would go in a sense crazy on them. As he would begin to say unforgivable things to that person and would go on asking if they get it a million times while insulting them getting various effects from people when doing this and then making up a fake laugh once done. When around friends he cools down his ways, this is to get closer to them to be able to find his brother and sister. When it comes down to teachers of the school during class or anytime he would make fun of how their lesson failed and then explain to them what they messed up and how stupid it was to do so. his second person seems to be placed under the category of a boy with a very short temper and a  sharp tongue, due to how furious and how simply irked he can get. He tends to overreact in some situations, and is something of a sadistic arsonist rather. He is not above to enjoy a good fight, and he often blows up his opponents in a very brutal and gory fashion. Despite those brutal actions that are performed by him, his most distinctive trait. 

A Faker: Aeon is known for being a giant fake around people he's just met, Being that his main goal is to gain there trust and use them like a puppet in a puppet collection. By acting like a soft and gentle Boy, who had lost his parents from war, and using his gentle tone to speak, His best way of getting to a person. Once inside of the person "heart" he can show his real colors and cause chaos to behalf that person by spreading lies and such to other ninjas and villages all to add up to his main goal of war.

Pride:
Being that he has, as he says it, The number one Fire release of all. Aeon finds himself as the top notch shinobi and labels himself as "The God of Fire" As he would usually talk  about his lava so much that his speech slowly turns into that or metaphors or riddles. 

Wrath:
Although the other sins don't govern over the body of Near as much as Pride and Wrath, They do have a great influence when it comes down to the lust for Men and their sexual organs(Lust), His want for More power and the world all to himself(Envy and Greed), And his large appetite and his long resting periods(Gluttony and Sloth). But out of those 6 Wrath beat all, His want for the world to be obliterated in a fight to the death between citizens, Students, Genin, Chuunin, Anbu and the rest of the ninja ranks and world out there. Though when it comes down to him and his ways, Near doesnt allow for his enemy to get the quick death they always wanted. His pride and his wrath mix, Causing him to pausing during each severing of a limb and Talk about his power and just why he calls himself the lava god. Laughing during each second, much like a sadist.

Likes: Chaos and Disorder, Two of the main things that amuse Aeon in many ways. One of Aeon's Favorite sayings are "My Joy comes from hate and my hate comes from joy" Meaning that Aeon Loves to see hatred around the ninja world, he loves to see sorrow and death, anything that causes sadness and hate, makes him happier. Unlike many, Aeon has more then two favorite colors, this being Black Red and Blue, as he thinks that they symbolize the beaten body of a human, but also the mix of Red and blue being purple, a common color for chaos. War, as Aeon says "Is fun to watch", noting his like of carnage and blood to be spread across the field, and his Love for the Seven Sins.
Dislikes: He hates everything that can deal with happiness in the world, He hates the flowers, the trees, the human beings that walk its earth, but he still wants it as his own. Though he hates to see the side of evil win, he also hates to see that of the side of good to win even more. Truthfully if either began to win of the other, Aeon would take it upon himself to "Balance it out". He hates to be outdone by anyone, much like a psycho, he will go on an outrage.
Motivation: Aeon is motivated by the fact he wishes to see hate in the world, By the want to be in a war of his own, and by the the power that the sin Wrath posses over him in many ways, from Massacre and Genocide and Suicide, Homicide.....Just the want for Blood
Fears: Aeon has many fears but one of the many fears that shows and that he speaks of is a world filled with peace. Though that isn't all he also fears that his power will never be acknowledged. Aeon fears a few animals such as Snakes which creep him out at some points, though he loves the King Cobra. He fears Death in the sense that he doesn't want to die before the world is left in chaos.


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History:

Pre-academy:
When Nate was born he was Born in an unknown village to a family of two before he came unto the world. Making it now a family of three. His mother was miss Kiyomi River who was a teacher at the academy and also was a top medical ninja who was world renown to all the villages making some cures for deceases others couldn't. His father was Luken River who was the interrogator for konoha but that wasn't it he also was in the info building of the village to give info toward the people that needed it. He was a very smart man. And as they said the baby that they made together was smart as well. Which the signs showed at an early age of his development as he began to talk 3 months before his first birthday. Walking a month before then as well. People would ask if he was older then he was as he walked around the village with his father or mother and all he would say is. "Im Nate River and im 1." only to leave a surprise on the persons face as he walked away with his parent with no goodbye. even though being a pure genius he didn't start the academy till he was 12 like others due to his body not exactly being big enough but his brain was. So turning 12 the academy began.

Academy:
One day he decided to go to the academy and become like others a ninja. "A ninja, how could smarts deal into it.... hmm im sure in many ways." That's what he had first thought when he joined it. Although being the son of one of the academy teachers his mom was not his teacher. instead it was a man with an eye patch but he didn't care as long as he got all of the things need to be done to become a ninja thinks would go great. on the first day the man had handed out books which had on there 'My Ninja Way'. which wasn't a very smart title for books about the three ninja skills you learn in the academy. But none the less he read it through. after weeks of the academy he graduated on time with the others nothing special just doing as told. Receiving his headband he looked at it for a second. His thoughts ran wild as the final thought was said. "Take things slow?" as if a question. Leaving out the room and putting on the headband. He was now a genin.

Genin:
The first actual full day of being a genin was the day he meet his jonin leader. who was actually a family friend to the River family. Ian Fujikifu a high ranked jonin leader who was known to everyone in the villages in the world. The first day the students were asked to introduce themselves. And as they did the others were to listen and stay quiet till it was there turn. For Nate it was no problem to stay quiet but to listen was another story as he was already stripping the person down in his mind. In a way to figure out what they really want deep inside. First up was a girl who Nate had no interest in due to her purple hair which had no fit. At first he thought it was hair die until he saw her meager powers of paper control. Which simply brought down his interest even more. Making him turn away from her. and due to this he waited for his turn while ignoring the other boy. Finally coming to him He stood and told them his name. "I am N." or those would think of it as his name. Which left him as nothing but a weird boy with a short name till their first mission. It was in a construction zone. although having no power he was able to pass the mission. Leaving the team of three there to fight the jonin watched from far away. The mission was to stop the gang known as the Con-Robbers. who robbed the construction workers of everything. A gang of 19. but this was not what made N so great. the mission was only a C rank due to the Hokage only thinking that 6 Con-robbers would be there. The Hokage had no idea that the boss would be there as well. The strongest of them all. After defeating the 19 gang members the boss being 20 came out. His teammates told nate to stay out the way due to him having no powers to fight the man. So he agreed to stya back for a while as he analyzed the area making every assumption and plan in his head to stop the man. Thats when it hit him. his friends had lost to the man and were on the ground. Ian still watched no coming in yet even though the mission turned into an A rank mission. Taking all the info he gathered the giant man came for Nate. His head didn't move an inch it just stared the man in the eyes. Pulling two kunai out and putting them in both hands as he raised them up slowly. Leaping for Nate the leader was an inch away as the kunai were already headed for rope cutting them. A rumbling was heard as the leader began to touch nate's nose Metal pipes weighing over 1000 pounds came down on the boss. Crushing him. Ian then finally came in and toke all the men in to the Hokage also he told the hokage who defeated the boss with a simple plan. Nate was then praised. Now knowing him as Near due to being able to kill someone when they got near to him. Few weeks later he entered the chuunin exams and passed.

Chuunin:
Finally announced as a chuunin Near left his team and trained on his own for a few years with a bunch of ninjutsu and other arts in the way of the ninja for his fighting style. He began to start back up his origami powers. Near was happy to be a Chuunin and began to do more things then when he was a genin. The mission were much harder. He was going on many missions with s rank ninja to fight. one day J was on the mission to find and kill a bandit that stole a secret scroll on the origami powers. When he went out to find them he found him located at a old shack. .when he broke into it Tenshi attacked him but after he got the first stab he noticed the man was old. He told J that he stole the scroll to learn new powers and keep himself safe. They then made a deal and J was offered to learn the power. days later he sent out a report that he success-ed in the mission and needed to rest some days before he went back to the village. When J started the training the man made a copy of the scroll one for J and one for him to return. J left and toke it back to the village and they secured it. After so J began to train with his copy again and was able to learn it. But now he has been resting for a while but no one knows why.  Training with so people that master the martial arts and things only to come back to a world of nothing. It had happened that he came back on the day his two teammates had died. It had been an attack in a nearby village they went to. they were dating so Near came to a conclusion. "Loving a person gets you killed." Even though a normal person would walk around gloomy for a few days. Near didn't, the only thing he did was go home and sleep. After a few days of sleeping and getting info on the explosion that happened. He swore to avenge them in a small way but not in a way they was to much as in killing. After that he was now 19 with loads of info on the man that did it. Giving this to the tsuchikage he was once again praised with the honor of being a jonin directly under the kage to serve as if an anbu for him and his deeds. Fully on his side. like a loyal servant. 

Jounin:
Near, now a jounin, has not forgotten his pledge to get revenge for his fallen comrades. He does mission of a variety of sorts, in addition to strategical planning. In addition, he continues to shun the trivialities of love. Why bother with love? It ended in the death of his friends, his comrades. Why SHOULD he care fr it? Love was an emotion that humans should outgrow. But, those are just his own opinions. It was also his opinion that he must make sure someone, somewhere, pays for the death of his friends. The young man which had given up all emotions had found an emotion which gave him more power than before. The power of wrath. His want to kill grew even more through the days of being a jounin in the village he had now been resting in called Hidden oasis. Now beig a jounin Nate needed a new look, a look that could describe him as something different to his enemies, with the black hair and the piercings, he wanted to be described as something of a spawn from hell. The words that made this look complete as he sat at the gates I his village were "Shall all ninja fall to me, to. Create the hill of lives." The young mans laugh filled the village. 
RP Sample:
Animal Path:

Chikushōdō began to run up a building by jumping from side to side of the two buildings. As things were about to get hectic in the village hidden in the leaf. Their friends were all ready to go and this was just a spot a lot of people wanted gone. Chikushodo's hair moved back and forth from the left and the right. Finally to the top of the building she stood there looking toward the village's gates, as she saw them, the people who were apart of her own self. As her Black attire had only covered most of her body, her legs were out and her boobs were almost able to be seen. The girl was very young for her age, But that was only because the girl was actually already dead. This was Tifa Shinoku's body which had been brought back by the mysterious man. As her soft Voice began to speak she said. "Bring on the pain, to the damned to Hell village....." Stopping in her tracks.

Asura Path

Only second after the girl was speaking a man had jumped down right next to her. He had a smile on his face as he had black curly like hair. his and the girls eyes were the same with the rippled eye in them. something strange had been going on. As the same people from before stood there and watched the two speak loudly over the village. He began to talk as his voice was different from the girls but further from the guys. ".....And show them what true power is. Your Hokage has committed treason and has threatened my village...." He said as the villagers begun to hear the man. He stopped talking as another thud was heard. The wind from the person blew up his red and black hair and made the bandages around his head blow off easily.

Naraka Path

A man with Blond hair came down. Falling right next to Shurado, His name was Jigokudo. Jigokudo looked around at all the people as the wind from his landing blew up his hair. As the hair fell down Jigokudo began to talk once again. "........I do not take lightly the act of threatening me and my village. I have no fear and i have nothing to worry about if i was to destroy you with this village......." Jigokudo had now stopped talking as he shifted his eyes back and forth looking at the village the ripples had become a crystal type of color. His clothing had resembled that of a konoha ninja' clothing, with the leaf Head band on it as well. This man was the once great J uzumaki senior.

Preta Path

Another man had came from the sky. His name was Gakido, another person from the group seen by the gates not to long ago. He showed up at the point of the last word from Jigokudo, they had all been standing in a row of how they had gotten there, Chikushodo, Shurado, Jigokudo and Gakido. As he had a great big smile on his face, Taking his hand and moving the blue hair, Which had fell into his face after his landing, out of his way. Starting to talk like the others had done. "......And after i take out this village i will be on my way with the bodies of the elders and the Hokage himself, im going to let this whole village be a witness of this great battle and their own destruction. And watch you all stand in awe as i win over the useless village........" Gakido said in his deep manly voice, with the smile of a tiger. His eyes had greenish blue paint around them. This man was the one known as the Crystal Giant, Hikane Crystalic.

Human Path

Ningendo, the fifth of the seven paths, Had shown up only walking to the side of Gakido. The man had silver hair and showed on his face that one of his eye sockets had been cut during his life, By J uzumaki. He wore skin tight clothing that could reach over his nose but he had choose not to wear it in that way. ".........if you would like to leave now, you may, but be warned if you don't leave i shall not spare your soul if you stand in my way as i walk, or attack as i talk........" Ningendo said to the public as low a voice he could as if he didn't want them to hear him. He took a look to the front of the group to see the final of them all come in to the group. Ningendo looked back at the girl. This was the body of Kutono Kaguya.

Deva Path

Tendo was now standing in front of the whole group as he had a serious face on. His figure was like a normal emotional person, or as would some people call them an Emo. Tendo wasted no time to get to the building with the others. His voice was the deepest and the scariest. "Now shall we begin the massacre of the village hidden in the leaf, show them what person like me can do to you in only a few seconds. Attack Six Paths of Pride!!" Tendo yelled as his arms went out in a sense as if telling them to scatters out through the village. his black hair blew back only a second after that had went on and he went on ahead with them. This man was the body of J uchiha jr. Chikushodo to the West, Tendo to the north, headed for the kage's office, Ningendo to the East, Gakido to the south, Jigokudo went with Tendo and Shurado to the south with Gakido.

Outer Path

Near had already been gone from sight of the village taking his leave to the middle of the forest till he had been needed. Controlling the bodies near spoke through each of the bodies toward the village, having fun with this as if he was talking to himself but really talking to a whole village without actually facing them, He had left the girl, Wrath at the gates alone as he turned into lava and went deep under ground to keep himself safe during the whole attack. things were about to get hectic and he needed to be far away from that village as possible keeping his
new Summoning near him the whole time. This was Neo-Near.


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Skar
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PostSubject: Re: Aeon Maxxie River    Aeon Maxxie River  I_icon_minitimeFri Apr 13, 2012 12:01 pm

I know this is a WIP, but before you continue, Jounin is actually A rank, not B. Thanks!
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PostSubject: Re: Aeon Maxxie River    Aeon Maxxie River  I_icon_minitimeFri Apr 13, 2012 5:35 pm

Alrighty, since you told me you were finished in the CB, I'll use that as a completion bump.

First things first, you're allowed to have 4 Specializations on this site, not just 3. So I recommend adding that fourth one, because I'm sure it can come in handy later on.

Secondly, personality section looks good, moving on from there.

Onto the history. A Jounin rank history should meet a minimum of 1600 words. You have 1517, which isn't too far off. I'm not going to be a stickler about it, but it looks like you don't have much on the history of the last section (the Jounin section), so if you could possibly add on to that to get a tad closer to the minimum, that'd be great.

Make those quick edits, and bump.
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PostSubject: Re: Aeon Maxxie River    Aeon Maxxie River  I_icon_minitimeFri Apr 13, 2012 6:36 pm

Bumpity bump^^
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PostSubject: Re: Aeon Maxxie River    Aeon Maxxie River  I_icon_minitimeFri Apr 13, 2012 7:43 pm

While Skar goes through your application, I will be speaking with Takeshi and Haji about Lava Release being usable. As it says in the clanless rules, it will be at our discretion, so I will be posting once the three of us talk and come to an agreement.
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PostSubject: Re: Aeon Maxxie River    Aeon Maxxie River  I_icon_minitimeFri Apr 13, 2012 11:29 pm

By the looks of it, it's a Jounin- worthy app to me now. I approve this application, and am turning it over to the hands of Dominic as per lava release.
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PostSubject: Re: Aeon Maxxie River    Aeon Maxxie River  I_icon_minitimeSat Apr 14, 2012 8:39 am

Just remove the spoilers from the app, and it will be totally ready to approve.
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PostSubject: Re: Aeon Maxxie River    Aeon Maxxie River  I_icon_minitimeSat Apr 14, 2012 11:30 am

Done
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PostSubject: Re: Aeon Maxxie River    Aeon Maxxie River  I_icon_minitimeSat Apr 14, 2012 2:09 pm

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