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PostSubject: Akenomyōsei vs. Dominic Edrick   Fri Nov 02, 2012 8:11 pm

I walked up to the large, open area and noticed that the Shiokage was already there. I thought to myself, I'm going to die, aren't I? Yeah. I'm going to die.

I began circulating chakra through my body while I walked and remained alert. When I reached the center, I looked at Dominic, the Shiokage and calmed my mind as I gripped the katana in my hand but didn't charge chakra through it, as it would give away my intent to him, even though he most likely already noticed my intent before I even reached here. "I'm honored to fight you, Venerable Shiokage, though this won't last very long. I'll do my best and show you what I can do, even if it's only a glimpse."
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PostSubject: Re: Akenomyōsei vs. Dominic Edrick   Fri Nov 02, 2012 8:26 pm

The day was young as I stood in a wide open field, the winds blowing ever so smooth across the valley. The grass stood ankle high, the stands breaking to the will of the breeze. I could see someone appear over the horizon, gripping what seemed like a blade. Once he approached, it was confirmed to be a cold metal blade intended for my blood. He spoke of the honor in fighting me, but it meant nothing. My eyes intensified towards him as only air and opportunity separated the likes of us. I would speak sharp and say my signature line.

"The time for talk is over kid.."

I would remove my cloak, the winds catching it and sending it away. I brought two choice weapons. My Divine Sword, and Myria's Desire. I would draw Myria's Desire with my left hand to my right hip and place it down by my side, my right hand pressing on my Divine Sword, also on my right hip but leaving it in its sheath . The kid was only one thing to me. Another name on the toll to hell. I would slide my feet to where they pointed out slightly and put weight mainly on my right leg. I was on the balls of my feet with pressure as I looked towards my enemy. He had the first move.

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PostSubject: Re: Akenomyōsei vs. Dominic Edrick   Fri Nov 02, 2012 8:36 pm

He means business... I thought. I then charged a little chakra into my legs and hands to increase grip ability and moving speed. I could feel the weight of my geta propelling me forward toward the Shiokage.

In lifting off toward him, I noticed the angle of his stance change ever so slightly, so I slid around to his right side and tried to launch a sweeping kick, which if it at first failed, I would then lunge the tip of my blade toward his lower torso to give me just enough room to move out of the way and begin the next volley.
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PostSubject: Re: Akenomyōsei vs. Dominic Edrick   Sat Nov 03, 2012 6:04 pm

I watched as the man attempted to move in towards me. The same pressures were applied as before and there was a sense of great anticipation with this next move of his. I prepared according to this anticipation. However, I was to be let down in a major way. He attempted to deliver a sweep kick to take me off my feet. Little did he know, that I was the master of stopping a sweep kick. This would be ugly. As he made his sweep, it was all but over.

Being that I was putting pressure on the balls of both my feet and that my pressure was built up in my right leg, it meant that I could transition my momentum in a split moment's time. My timing would be perfect, so perfect it would take him by total surprise. I immediately shifted all the weight to my left leg as the pressure built in my right allowed me to bring it up and stomp right back down, just as his shin and ankle were preparing to pass underneath my foot. The power from this stomp mixed with his momentum would snap his ankle like a twig. However, that wasn't all. As I stomped, breaking his ankle, I unsheathed my Divine Sword upside down at the same time and proceeded to stab down on that very same leg, my Divine Sword stabbing right into the knee of my opposition, tearing his entire lower leg from his body, the blade disconnecting every ligament within his knee and pushing through the cartilage. Myria's Desire in my left hand would slash and meet his katana as he attempted to stab at my torso, rendering him useless to stop my assault. I was so sharp on this skill, for it is a very common move by opposition. One I had mastered stopping long ago. In my head, my next move was already in mind. If he were to continue, it would be on one leg, though his success ratio was not in his favor. Although it was never like he had a success ratio to begin with....

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PostSubject: Re: Akenomyōsei vs. Dominic Edrick   Mon Nov 05, 2012 12:21 pm

As I slid in for his right leg, he switched his footing. I could barely hardly notice the change because he was so quick and I knew off the bat that it was game over for my leg. When he switched his footing, he stepped down on my shin/ankle and snapped it, which was so easily snapped, I couldn't even feel the pain. At the same time, drew one of his swords upside down and stabbed it right into my knee, separating my lower leg completely from my body. His timing was perfect. So perfect, I couldn't react at all to counter his assault.

However, I took the brief second in space after he stabbed into my knee, instantly dropped the blade that was in my hand, charged chakra throughout my body and punched his upper left leg (just above the knee, entering the thigh area) with my left hand. This movement would be too quick for him to notice and would also take him off guard since my information stated I was only right-handed. I could already feel the wound from the stab incurred from the Shiokage's last assault, and all in the same interval, I used my right hand not even half a second after to slam into the ground and regain my footing, though now I only had the use of one leg. My constant training would make this endeavor as simple as breathing. When I punched at the ground, the force of it brought my blade flying two feet into the air and as I came up, I met with the blade and used my shoulder to push it toward the Shiokage's left arm. This move would at the very least give me an extra second of time to make another move.

By the time I would land up on my foot, I would already be charging chakra in my remaining leg in order to propel myself away from the Shiokage and make space between us. As taijutsu is my one of my primary masteries, these maneuvers would be complete in seconds (according to B-rank speed) and the chance of success would be rather high. Though, him being the "Green Flash," putting distance between us would be to my detriment, so then as soon as I regained enough space between us, I would charge chakra into my usable leg and again charge toward him, this time much more quickly, as my chakra was still active. It would have to remain active if I want to remain alive.


Last edited by Akenomyōsei on Mon Nov 05, 2012 7:05 pm; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : taking out abilities relating to Kekkei Tota and chakra natures)
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PostSubject: Re: Akenomyōsei vs. Dominic Edrick   Mon Nov 05, 2012 6:43 pm

(Bro we strictly agreed that this was a kenjutsu, taijutsu fight only. You have no techniques. Therefore your charge time and attack are denied Bc they have no rank or chakra cost. This is the reason I agreed to fight you in this manner. Your attack may be allowed in normal form, until you atleast register the techniques so that I can see them. Here is why.

You charged this passively. There is no way that at the speed in which you punched is B Rank, which is the highest a passive jutsu can be. Edit your post and or show me the technique. All techniques require atleast a charge unless stated otherwise. So you cant vaguely use something I haven't fully discussed with the rest of the admin. Either edit your post or I will post being allowed to you all of my available jutsu, which wont look pretty for you)

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PostSubject: Re: Akenomyōsei vs. Dominic Edrick   Mon Nov 05, 2012 7:04 pm

(Understood. Made changes and will soon make these techniques when my character is approved and the staff agree to my Kekkei Tota.)
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PostSubject: Re: Akenomyōsei vs. Dominic Edrick   Mon Nov 05, 2012 8:17 pm

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However, I took the brief second in space after he stabbed into my knee, instantly dropped the blade that was in my hand, charged chakra throughout my body and punched his upper left leg (just above the knee, entering the thigh area) with my left hand. This movement would be too quick for him to notice and would also take him off guard since my information stated I was only right-handed. I could already feel the wound from the stab incurred from the Shiokage's last assault, and all in the same interval, I used my right hand not even half a second after to slam into the ground and regain my footing, though now I only had the use of one leg. My constant training would make this endeavor as simple as breathing. When I punched at the ground, the force of it brought my blade flying two feet into the air and as I came up, I met with the blade and used my shoulder to push it toward the Shiokage's left arm. This move would at the very least give me an extra second of time to make another move.

As my assault was successful, his leg disconnected from his body. However, he seemed to try a desperation type maneuver. It would be futile. One would think that a right handed person would surprise with a left handed assault. However I wasn't right handed myself. I was a lefty. So assuming a left handed assault wasn't out of the ordinary. Even so it would be even more futile for as soon as his blood spilled, activation of Eagle Eye instantly occurred. This brought forth an increase of speed by over 50% on top of my SS Rank. Putting me at a mind blowing 170% of my Maximum Potential and an immediate lock on to my target. So within that second, everything was able to be predicted based on his movement. This allowed for the finishing touch.

As his punch was winding, I could register it all within my brain. Where it was coming by angle of his arm. As my weight had immediately been shifted into the stomping right foot, all weight was taken off the left leg. This and the fact my sword was into the ground, allowed me to use that to increase further my counter attack. As his punch came forward, my left foot thrust down upon his fist. Using all the weight applying to my right leg now, along with my right arm on the sword, I used my superior power and speed to shove the middle of my left shoe into his punch. The force of my kick to his punch would shatter his entire forearm and I wasn't even done. There was more.

I still had the other blade in my left hand, and this is where it would be all over. I would now slash down upon him, my Myria's Desire slashing the area at the base of his neck and collar bone. No matter if he moved his head to the side or tried to give way with his only free leg, the angle of the blade if it didn't connect with his neck beheading him, would cut the middle of his head off, the blade diagonally crossing between his eyes. There would be no transition for him. This battle was simply ........over .......

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PostSubject: Re: Akenomyōsei vs. Dominic Edrick   Tue Nov 06, 2012 12:51 am

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I still had the other blade in my left hand, and this is where it would be all over. I would now slash down upon him, my Myria's Desire slashing the area at the base of his neck and collar bone. No matter if he moved his head to the side or tried to give way with his only free leg, the angle of the blade if it didn't connect with his neck beheading him, would cut the middle of his head off, the blade diagonally crossing between his eyes. There would be no transition for him. This battle was simply ........over .......


As I took my last healthy breaths, it seemed as though everything went in slow motion. I could see his blade slowly moving toward my throat. This feeling...it was so confusing. Looking at the very blade that will take off my head and I feel calm. Relaxed. The only thing I had the strength left to do were smile and ask: "Edrick-sama...did I make it?" I only had just enough strength to whisper the words and then smile as I fell unconscious. This...is...goodbye...
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PostSubject: Re: Akenomyōsei vs. Dominic Edrick   Tue Nov 06, 2012 9:56 am

As the blade wiped his head from the rest of his body, there were a few words spoken before hand. The man asked if he made it. The sword finished him off and his head lifted away from his body and flung off to the right. I would pull my Divine Sword from the ground after his body fell limp, and spin it around in my fingers, sheathing it back onto my right hip. Myria's Desire I would return right after. I took a few steps back from his dead body, staring for a moment to answer his question. Did he make it?

"I'll leave your fate in Myria's hands..."

I would say not another word after this and turn and walk away. In a strange twist of fate, my cloak had blown around the battlefield, the winds directing in such a way that it circled around and met back at me. I would reach out and grab it by the collar, swing it up and toss it back over my left shoulder. It would fall to a rest, and I would simply fade over the horizon. Another body added to the list, another dream ended by my blade.

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