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Rohim Edrick
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PostSubject: [Rohim/ Jutsu Registrar]   Thu Sep 06, 2012 4:49 pm

Name: Raiton no Yoroi
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton
Distance: Self
Description: The user wraps their body in a layer of lightning chakra that, instead of being used offensively, is used to electrically stimulate the user's nervous system. The technique speeds up neural synapses to react faster to danger and to push physical prowess to the absolute limit, allowing for tremendous raw speed (an increase of 120%). This armour, combined with taijutsu, allows the user to utilise nintaijutsu. When using the armour at full power, it causes the tips of his hair to spike up and his reflexes are said to be comparable to the speed of a lightning flash, making it difficult even for the Sharingan, to keep up with him. The armour also increases the user's defences, drastically reducing, if not completely negating, damage from incoming attacks up to B rank (A rank for raiton attacks and S rank doton) even able to deflect powerful attacks like the chidori. Against weapons this technique defends against iron perfectly and reduces damage from higher grades of weapons by half. Taijutsu used while in this armor are increased in power by 20% (a one rank increase) or have a special form that enhances it somehow (anything like this must be approved by an admin). Entering this armor takes a post charge equal to a user's rank charge for a S rank jutsu and lasts for up to eight rounds. Once per topic.

This technique can be cancelled out by an opponent's high level (at least A rank) fuuton techniques. These fuuton techniques that can cancel out this technique must be directly attacking the user as AoE (area of effect) type jutsu will not achieve this effect. If hit by one direct S rank technique the technique ends early and the armor fades away, if hit by one direct A rank fuuton technique the effects of the speed boost are halved and if hit by a second follow up A rank technique it is cancelled out early.

This technique has a major drawback, however. The chakra drain and stress on the body make it so this technique is only able to be used once per week. However if someone is doing a large amount of in character battle they are able to recharge it through sheer will, for every three IC battles you are a part of in the cool down of the original use you are able to use Raiton no Yoroi once more, it can be recharged a maximum of one time in a week, an attempted start of another will cause the user's body to completely shut down and kill them.



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Rohim Edrick
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PostSubject: Re: [Rohim/ Jutsu Registrar]   Thu Sep 06, 2012 4:55 pm

It's a canon technique.. so i don't think any editing is needed. I meet all the requirements and I already deducted 20,000 from Skar and 5,000 from Rohim to cover the cost.

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PostSubject: Re: [Rohim/ Jutsu Registrar]   Sat Sep 29, 2012 2:17 am


Name: Eagle Kick
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu/ Taijutsu
Element: Fuuton
Distance: Short-Mid
Description: Requires charging equivalent to handseals at this rank. After charging Fuuton chakra into the leg and feet, the Edrick releases a charging kick at the opponent at a very high speed (55 mph). upon contact, the wind from the Edrick's leg to feet is released in the shape of a giant eagle. This kick deals both physical damage from the kick, and wind-cutting damage from the eagle. The charged kick has the ability to dent titanium. When hitting an unarmored body, the physical force of the kick can precisely break bones and cause severe bruising of the skin. The eagle, which forms around the leg which is kicking, shreds and rips apart skin. The eagle has an 3-foot wingspan and is as wide as the caster's leg. The wind can cut through both skin and muscle down to the bone. The wind eagle upon impact will completely tear apart any armor than that of reinforced steel or lower, anything above will suffer major damage, but not nearly as much. When piercing through armor, this wind eagle can cut three quarters of an inch into skin. The eagle only hits the target if the physical kick (by the foot or by the leg) hits them. You can't use this as a ranged attack. In every case, this jutsu knocks the target back by 9 feet. 6 post cooldown.

This jutsu is exclusive to members of the Edrick Clan.

(Transferring from Mirage)

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Dominic Edrick
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PostSubject: Re: [Rohim/ Jutsu Registrar]   Sat Sep 29, 2012 8:47 am

Ok, I've already taken the penalty from this in the Compression Suit topic. All I would like to see here is,now that your more advanced in the process, could you clean up the description a bit? It seems to be all over the place now. Also give the size of the eagle itself. Thank you sir.

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