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Nami
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PostSubject: Re: Yukiyami Clan   Fri Sep 07, 2012 4:36 pm

Name: Hidden Blizzard Jutsu
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When the jutsu is cast is everyone who enters the blizzard affected?

Name: New Moon's Grasp (Stage 1)
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So what causes them to be caught in the jutsu, seeing the snow or what?

Name: Ice Blade (Stage 1)
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 Durability per size

Name: Ice Clone/ Substitution
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How long do these clones last?
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How many can be created at once and how many can be made per topic?

Name: Ice Blade (Stage 2)
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Again, Durabilties per size

Name: Hyoton: Bunshin Daibakuha (Ice Form: Clone Great Explosion)
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"Regardless of distance" No you can't push someone who is about 90 feet away from you back 20 more feet no they have to be within a certain distance.

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Name:Hikyuu Summoning
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Be sure to register all users of this clan's leopards in the summoning section

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Mizuki
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PostSubject: Re: Yukiyami Clan   Fri Sep 07, 2012 6:02 pm

Edit Bump!

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Dominic Edrick
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PostSubject: Re: Yukiyami Clan   Fri Sep 07, 2012 6:22 pm

Lol, I love how you put your warning of the pet shop. Hilarious. Now, even though Nami is going through the entire clan, I still want to point out, even though you added the pet shop rules, you didn't change the wording in stage two of the kekkei genkai. It still speaks of summoning and blood contracts. You can keep the blood contract as a taboo ritual type deal, but they can't be summons. The pet is either always with you, or has to be in the topic with you in order to fight alongside.

Ex: It can't mysteriously appear after not mentioning it for 5 posts in a topic.

Change the Stage 2 wording please, or you will be stoned, and I'm talkin baked..

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PostSubject: Re: Yukiyami Clan   Fri Sep 07, 2012 8:25 pm

-Edit Bump!

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PostSubject: Re: Yukiyami Clan   Fri Sep 07, 2012 9:18 pm

I'm gonna wait until Nami is finished, but I see a few things I want to elaborate on bc you need two approvals anyway. Just giving you a heads up.

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PostSubject: Re: Yukiyami Clan   Sat Sep 08, 2012 4:00 pm

Hidden Blizzard - I'm not a fan of how it exactly replicates the hidden mist. With it being a blizzard, maybe add the temperature it has to be, and also how fast the snow falls. If its depending on ow the user wants it, expand on the variations.

Ice Shuriken - For a D Rank technique, 60 mph is excessive. Also, 19 yards isn't a long distance. Kids can throw shuriken 19 yards easy. I'll allow some expansion on that.

Ice Style: Body Flicker - There really isn't a difference here between this one and the real body flicker. If you choose to use this one, it needs to involve actual ice. If it does get approved, you won't be able to purchase the original body flicker.

For now, work on these and I will continue.

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