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PostSubject: Konpaku   Mon Jun 04, 2012 10:59 pm



Name: Konpaku
Type: Katana
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Description: Originally unknown but rumored to be made of a type of tungsten infused with wurtzite boron nitride, which is known as a type of diamond. The total length of the blade is 72cm, while the hilt is standard size.
Abilities: Konpaku's ability strongly is shown by the meaning of its name. Konpaku is a ghost blade with three main abilities. Konpaku is a very loyal weapon, only working for its master. The sword is capable of sensing whether its owner is alive or not and if the owner is alive but someone else is in possession of the blade, the blade will merely become intangible to the point where he cannot be gripped by anyone else.

The first ability is for the blade of the sword to be able to turn invisible, however the interesting thing with this is how it turns invisible can be manipluated so the entire blade doesnt have to be invisible at once. When invisible the blade is exactly the same in size and shape and density, it is merely invisible. This ability has no downsides as it is merely an innate ability within the blade that just alters its appearance. Note that only the blade is capable of being invisible, not the hilt itself.

The second and main ability is the swords ability to become intangible. Similar to the invibility ability, the sword is able to either make the entire blade intangable or sections of it. If sections of the blade is made intangible, the sword will not break apart or anything, it will always remain whole and connected. The sword up to this point doesnt require chakra and can be activated remotely, or by will. This ability since is through the blade also has no downsides, however unlike the invisibility ability it has a time limit. Once activated it can only be kept active for 3 posts before the blade becomes tangible again and cannot be activated again for 10 posts.

The swords 3rd and final ability is to grant it's owner its ability for a great chakra cost and short amount of time. If the owner uses the invisibility ability of the sword on themselves they can only maintain the ability for 3 posts and afterwards there is a 15 post cooldown. While the intangible ability only last for 2 post and requires a 20 post cooldown. Another downside to the sword is using the ability on oneself severely cuts the users chakra, draining a third of the users maximum chakra. Along with that great chakra control is needed to maintain the ability so the user generally isn't capable of performing any type of ninjutsu or genjutsu while using the swords ability. A final downside is although the user may be invisible or intangible, their chakra or movement isn't so it is still possible to detect them even when the technique is active.
Durability: Due to the items that created it, Konpaku is considered to be ranked within the highest of possible durability
History: How Konpaku came into existance is unknown, however the sword shares a great tie with Ninku and his family. Konpaku has been passed down from father to son on Ninku's father's side and it's known to be one of the most unique and powerful blades ever utilized. Konpaku was handed to Ninku from his father. As the final owner of the blade, Ninku used its power gained the Title "The Ghost of the Hidden Tundra".
Appearance:
(Blade is not serrated and the blade is much lightly, almost a white colour)


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PostSubject: Re: Konpaku   Tue Jun 05, 2012 4:52 am

Ok, not going to lie here, but this sword is looking a bit too OP. I need you to seperatly place each individual ability in its own paragraph so that it is easier to break down. Rigjt now its probably in the six figures range which you won't reach before the weapon purchase deadline. Make these changes then bump.

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PostSubject: Re: Konpaku   Tue Jun 05, 2012 5:02 am

Bump.

I also explained the downsides to the sword a bit more. Truthfully the only part of the sword that's OP is its ability to grant the user it's powers however I tried to make it fair and gave the abilities high costs and cool downs.
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PostSubject: Re: Konpaku   Tue Jun 05, 2012 7:28 am

Invisibility - Ok, when it comes to this ability there has to be some sort of chakra usage for this. Depending on the length of your blade, it needs to be broken up into sections using thirds. Now, I would say that each third of the blade to do this will cost 15 chakra. What you need to tell me now is, how long this will last and the requirement to charge it will be like so....

1/3 of the blade - 1 post charge, 15 chakra

2/3 - 2 post charge, 30 chakra

Entire blade 3 post charge, 45 chakra

Now the next thing you need to tell me is if it is invisible, does it become a 'phased' blade like Madara's ability?

Do not edit it in, just answer me first. I'm breaking this down to make the blade affordable for you, so if it seems like a bit much, don't be offended.

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PostSubject: Re: Konpaku   Tue Jun 05, 2012 1:40 pm

Alright well its a standard katana blade which could range from anywhere between 60-73cm so I guess I'll say that its 72cm long so a third would be 24cm.

As for the invisibility ability, no it isn't phased because that's the intangible ability. When the blade becomes invisible its just invisible.
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PostSubject: Re: Konpaku   Tue Jun 05, 2012 7:45 pm

I would like you to add in the specifics of the blade's length. If your going to include the handle as part of the invisibility, state so, but it will affect the price a bit.

Now, even though it doesn't lose its density, I just have to ask just in case it was ever used wrong. Now that we covered that, I would like you edit it in for technicality purposes that it isn't a phase. It just helps that the information is there.

Since you have agreed to the proposal of the thirds I presented, add those numbers I stated into the blade and I will assess the duration and cooldown in my next post, as well as move onto the next ability.

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PostSubject: Re: Konpaku   Tue Jun 05, 2012 7:59 pm

Okay, edited.
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PostSubject: Re: Konpaku   Tue Jun 05, 2012 8:17 pm

1/3 of the blade - 1 post charge, 15 chakra

2/3 - 2 post charge, 30 chakra

Entire blade 3 post charge, 45 chakra

You still need to add this information into the invisibility section of the weapon. Ill go ahead and give you your durations.

1/3 will last for 6 posts and has a 5 post cooldown

2/3 will last for 5 posts with an 8 post cooldown. If you use this version, the entire blade becomes un-usable for the rest of the battle.

Entire Blade will last for 5 posts, once per topic. Once this is used, you cannot use the ability any longer.

Put these into the invisibility section and you can organize it how you wish.

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