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PostSubject: Appa.   Mon Mar 26, 2012 7:33 pm



Name: Appa
Species: Bison
Height: 8' Tall 16' long
Weight: 500Lbs
Rank: S-Rank
Element: Fuuton (Wind)
Personality: Appa is a rather Docile creature, following Haru wherever he goes, but trying to avoid trouble. He can mainly be found lying down or grazing, but he mainly sleeps. He only comes to fight when called by Haru to fight with him. His defensive nature doesn't help in the fighting though, it only helps him escape situations faster. Though when he is angered by somebody who wakes him from a nap or interrupts his grazing, he will attack, using his great size to preform Taijutsu skills.
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Name: Flight of the Bison King
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fuuton
Distance: -
Description: One post charge required. With the command of 'Yip Yip' from Haru, Appa can take flight for 8 posts using his master of Fuuton ninjutsu. He can fly at 60mph and can carry up to two people on his back. After this skill is used a 7 post cool down is required before another use.

Name: Whistle of the Master
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: -
Distance: 0-1 mile
Description: One post charge. Haru will whistle and and summon Appa to aid him in whatever he is doing. As soon as this whistle is heard by Appa, he will rush to Haru's side if he is within a mile from origin of the sound. 1 post cooldown, once per topic.

Note: Appa will only respond to Haru whistling, nobody can mimic the whistle because it requires 5 of Haru's chakra to do

Name: Tail Whip
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Taijutsu
Element: -
Distance: Close
Description: One post charge. After charge, Appa will charge at a target at 65mph and slam his massive tail. The tail is swung with a speed of 30 mph on top of the charge which has enough force to break bones and cause major bruising. 4 post cool down. Appa must be flying to use this.

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PostSubject: Re: Appa.   Sat Mar 31, 2012 9:28 pm

Bumpage

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PostSubject: Re: Appa.   Sat Mar 31, 2012 10:32 pm

Carried over from mirage, approved and free

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PostSubject: Re: Appa.   Sat Mar 31, 2012 10:38 pm

No, its not, there are a few things that need reviewed

Rank increased to S, added a B Rank justu, changed a B Rank jutsu to a passive ability

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PostSubject: Re: Appa.   Sun Apr 01, 2012 5:32 pm

Tail Whip
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What Is the speed he is charging at? How fast does the tail slam into the ground?
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Can he use this while he is flying or does have to be on the ground?

Whistle of the master
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If someone else manages to copy your whistle Will Appa be able to distinguish this or not or will he still go to the sound?

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PostSubject: Re: Appa.   Sun Apr 01, 2012 5:48 pm

Tail Slam
-65 mph is the speed at which he will charge, regardless of land or air.
-The tail itself is swung at about 30mph
-Appa can do this whether on the ground or in air

Whistle
-This tech was already good, but no, only my whistle since I have to pay 5 chakra to do use it

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PostSubject: Re: Appa.   Sun Apr 01, 2012 5:58 pm

Tail Whip
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Alright add those in and I believe your good
Whistle of the Master
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Ah Alright well make sure that's added in

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PostSubject: Re: Appa.   Sun Apr 01, 2012 6:19 pm

Done. After our approval, Tak will need to come in and do the new pricing

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PostSubject: Re: Appa.   Sun Apr 01, 2012 6:28 pm

Approved

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Takeshi may now price it

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PostSubject: Re: Appa.   Wed Apr 04, 2012 6:20 pm

Pricing bump

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PostSubject: Re: Appa.   Sun Apr 08, 2012 8:49 pm

Gonna do some more modding first


Flight - Put it in a tech format since a buffalo technically can't fly

Legs - I'll allow extra legs since its a kage pet but Ill have to include a small fee for them

Whistle of the Master - Sounds more like a technique for you personally rather than Appa



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PostSubject: Re: Appa.   Sun Apr 08, 2012 9:00 pm

Bump

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PostSubject: Re: Appa.   Sun Apr 08, 2012 9:09 pm

Tail Whip - Alright I understand how this works if youre flying but how do you charge someone and then hit them with your tail from the ground?

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PostSubject: Re: Appa.   Sun Apr 08, 2012 9:10 pm

Meh, Ill just take out the charging aspect of it, I intended for it to be an aerial combo anyway

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PostSubject: Re: Appa.   Sun Apr 08, 2012 9:20 pm

55,000 Ryo

Base Cost - Bison (exotic) - 15k
Extra Legs (special) - 4k
S-Rank - 20k
Flight of the Bison King - 8k
Whistle of the Master - 2k
Tail Whip - 6k


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PostSubject: Re: Appa.   Sun Apr 08, 2012 9:36 pm

20k already paid

-I'll begin to buy things off once I get more money

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PostSubject: Re: Appa.   Thu May 17, 2012 10:49 pm

Adding another 20000 to paid off department

Paid: 40k
Remains: 15k

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PostSubject: Re: Appa.   Thu May 31, 2012 9:10 pm

Bump?

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PostSubject: Re: Appa.   Thu May 31, 2012 9:22 pm

20k removed, 15k remains

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