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Dominic Edrick
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PostSubject: Re: [Renga Zakii/ Jutsu Registration]   Mon Apr 16, 2012 10:19 pm

Well looking at it again, I feel it needs to be better explained.

Your S Rank is gonna need to be reworked. You cannot reduce charge time. Eliminate that part completely.

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PostSubject: Re: [Renga Zakii/ Jutsu Registration]   Tue Apr 17, 2012 7:26 pm

I can't reduce charge time? That the whole basis of the Satsujin S Rank you worked out with me. I basically made a carbon copy, just to benefit the Berserker Style Taijutsu that Renga uses

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PostSubject: Re: [Renga Zakii/ Jutsu Registration]   Tue Apr 17, 2012 7:50 pm

Bro, reducing handseal time and charge time has always been a no. If you got it through the Satsujin, doesnt mean you can have it anywhere else. Your basically carbon copying all your characters to do the same things, yet being totally different in abilities.

Last I checked, reducing charge time is a no. I can talk with Tak and Haji, but if you have it now with Haru, you best count your blessings that you recieved that.

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PostSubject: Re: [Renga Zakii/ Jutsu Registration]   Tue Apr 17, 2012 7:52 pm

Alright, If I can't have that, then I'll find something

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PostSubject: Re: [Renga Zakii/ Jutsu Registration]   Tue Apr 17, 2012 7:55 pm

I also edited Bazooka, just dropped the two handed aspect altogether

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PostSubject: Re: [Renga Zakii/ Jutsu Registration]   Wed Apr 18, 2012 3:31 pm

Bazooka is good now, makes more sense without the one handed aspect. You kept the two handed.

What alse needs to be reviewed here?

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PostSubject: Re: [Renga Zakii/ Jutsu Registration]   Wed Apr 18, 2012 5:11 pm

Just the S Rank

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PostSubject: Re: [Renga Zakii/ Jutsu Registration]   Wed Apr 18, 2012 6:13 pm

When you have figured out what you want it to be, repost it.

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PostSubject: Re: [Renga Zakii/ Jutsu Registration]   Wed Apr 18, 2012 8:03 pm

-.- We covered the S Rank yesterday. You said you had to talk to Haji and Tak about it

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PostSubject: Re: [Renga Zakii/ Jutsu Registration]   Wed Apr 18, 2012 8:55 pm

Actually, if I may request for a change in the clanless jutsu. I wish to remove the D Rank Bijuutsu seeing as Kash took them and it is useless to have

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PostSubject: Re: [Renga Zakii/ Jutsu Registration]   Sun Apr 22, 2012 8:17 pm

Bump

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PostSubject: Re: [Renga Zakii/ Jutsu Registration]   Tue Apr 24, 2012 7:11 pm

Bump

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PostSubject: Re: [Renga Zakii/ Jutsu Registration]   Tue Apr 24, 2012 7:35 pm

Stop effin bumping. When the three of us can talk, we will get to it. There are other things you can be doing with your time. Like posting IN CHARACTER.

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PostSubject: Re: [Renga Zakii/ Jutsu Registration]   Tue Apr 24, 2012 8:59 pm

your S-rank is denied, there is no way i'm allowing a technique that's going to let you do anything B-rank or lower at a passive level. Especially after given a boost in taijutsu, then claiming that you can passively do taijutsu moves. This is definately not getting approved at all. given that it gives a stat boost, your saying you're basically pulling off S-rank powered taijutsu moves passively. Hell to the fucking no. create something else as an S-rank technique cause this is never going to get approved. end of discussion.

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