HomeCalendarFAQSearchMemberlistUsergroupsRegisterLog in

Share | 
 

 [Renga Zakii/ Jutsu Registration]

Go down 
Go to page : 1, 2  Next
AuthorMessage
Renga Zakii
Chūnin
avatar

Posts : 33
Ryo : 2200

Ninja Info Card
Chakra:
200/200  (200/200)

PostSubject: [Renga Zakii/ Jutsu Registration]   Sun Mar 11, 2012 7:01 pm


Name: Gungnir: The Legendary Spear
Canon/Custom:
Rank: B
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Distance: Close
Description: One post charge; after charging chakra throughout one arm the user locks onto a target and throw a powerful punch or palm thrust. The effect of this technique is chakra reinforcement of both the hardness of the user's skin on their arm to be the grade of steel as well as giving them the ability to punch through iron like rice paper and punch through three inches of steel. 4 round cool down.


______________________________________________________________________________
Missions:
 







Last edited by Renga Zakii on Sat Mar 24, 2012 12:12 pm; edited 1 time in total
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Renga Zakii
Chūnin
avatar

Posts : 33
Ryo : 2200

Ninja Info Card
Chakra:
200/200  (200/200)

PostSubject: Re: [Renga Zakii/ Jutsu Registration]   Thu Mar 15, 2012 8:45 pm

Bump

______________________________________________________________________________
Missions:
 





Back to top Go down
View user profile
Nami
Shimokage
avatar

Posts : 245
Ryo : 53300

Ninja Info Card
Chakra:
320/320  (320/320)

PostSubject: Re: [Renga Zakii/ Jutsu Registration]   Thu Mar 15, 2012 10:34 pm

Code:
One post charge for a B rank, doubt that's gunna fly I say 2 posts at the minimum.

Code:
How long Does this last?

______________________________________________________________________________


Credit goes to Takeshi
-Alias-
The Burning Light
Approval Stamp
Spoiler:
 

Back to top Go down
View user profile
Haru Satsujin
S-Rank
avatar

Posts : 276
Ryo : 3500

Ninja Info Card
Chakra:
320/320  (320/320)

PostSubject: Re: [Renga Zakii/ Jutsu Registration]   Thu Mar 15, 2012 10:41 pm

Taijutsu moves are able to have a single post charge. The jutsu is also single use then cool down

______________________________________________________________________________

~Blood alone moves the wheels of history~
~Maritn Luther~



Spoiler:
 
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Nami
Shimokage
avatar

Posts : 245
Ryo : 53300

Ninja Info Card
Chakra:
320/320  (320/320)

PostSubject: Re: [Renga Zakii/ Jutsu Registration]   Thu Mar 15, 2012 10:46 pm

They are? psh aint nobody told meh but anyway

Code:
 Add in the single use the cool down

______________________________________________________________________________


Credit goes to Takeshi
-Alias-
The Burning Light
Approval Stamp
Spoiler:
 

Back to top Go down
View user profile
Dominic Edrick
Shiokage
avatar

Posts : 971
Ryo : 64600

Ninja Info Card
Chakra:
410/410  (410/410)

PostSubject: Re: [Renga Zakii/ Jutsu Registration]   Fri Mar 16, 2012 3:14 pm

You need to add what it does to a human body when hit. At b rank, your cooldown is along the lines of 7. Are you punching through three inches of steel or denting the steel three inches? If your punching through it, this is auto A Rank, and punching through any metal at all I think would require an elemental assist unless it was the 8 gates.

______________________________________________________________________________








Back to top Go down
View user profile
Renga Zakii
Chūnin
avatar

Posts : 33
Ryo : 2200

Ninja Info Card
Chakra:
200/200  (200/200)

PostSubject: Re: [Renga Zakii/ Jutsu Registration]   Sat Mar 24, 2012 12:35 pm

D Rank

Name: Shunshin no Jutsu (Body Flicker Technique)
Canon/Custom: Canon
Type: Supplementary
Element: -
Distance: Close to Medium
Description: This jutsu requires one handseal. This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily vitalise the body and move at extreme speeds. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance and elevation between the user and the intended destination. (Once per topic)

Name: Raiton: Finger Bullets
Canon/Custom: Custom
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton
Distance: 0-50 yards
Description: Continuous charge. Chakra is focused into the index finger tips on both hands. Golf ball sized balls of lightning can be shot from the finger tips at speeds of 30mph. Each shot can numb 3" when it contacts human skin. It also leaves first degree burns, scalding their skin and leaving small blisters. Each finger can shoot 3 shots. All the chakra can be focused into one index finger instead of both. This does not increase the damage done, but the size of the ball increases to baseball size and the finger can shoot 6 shots instead of 3. Each blast is about one inch in size, the large ball on the index finger decreasing each time a shot is fired. One shot per index finger, per post (2 shots per post total) and the user cannot be holding anything else while the technique is active. No cool down.

Note: It does not require 10 chakra per shot, only 10 chakra for the whole jutsu

Name: Yonbi no Kazuri: Storm Cloak
Canon/Custom: Custom
Type: Bijuu
Element: N/A
Distance: Self
Description: This cloaked form is something produced by the Yonbi no Kazuri's chakra stored within the host's body which emerges in fits of rage (eventually at will through training) but is not strong enough to actually for any of the Yonbi's tails. The cloak is a layer of brown chakra that covers the host's body and is a few inches thick, while in this form the user is granted the benefits of the Heart of the Wolverine (Ignore D Rank water and ice) as a passive natural ability in addition to several other enhancements (Ignore C Rank water and ice). In this form the hosts awareness of what is going on around them as well as their basic power level increases to 1.5x what it had been before. The host does not need to perform hand seals to be able to enter this cloaked form, however, they can't just simply choose to go into this form. At first the host can only enter this form if triggered by rage or another extremely strong emotion, however doing this means that they have no control over themselves in this form and will attack everyone around them friend and foe alike. If the host wants to be able to control their demon in cloak form they must train solo or with a single partner for 750 words, after that they are free to not only control themselves but to use this cloaked form at will. The host is able to remain in this cloaked-form for a maximum of six rounds before training to control it and they come out completely exhausted for three turns, after training they are able to stay in it for twelve rounds and come out only exhausted for a turn.
Mastery
Yes

C Rank

Name: Raiton: Raikyuu ( Lightning Ball )
Canon/Custom: Canon
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton
Distance: Long
Description: Requires Handseals. The user will create a large, several feet in diameter, ball of lightning in their hands. This ball can then be launched at a target and will travel at average speed, as fast as an average running person. When it comes in contact with something, it will burst, damaging and shocking anyone it touches and also slightly shocking anyone within three feet of its edge at the moment of impact. Direct hit may cause the opponent hefty burning damage as if hit by a lightning bolt. Outer damage from being close, can cause a very uncomfortable sensation as well as light numbness.

Name: Iaidō
Canon/Custom: Canon
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: -
Distance: Length of arm + weapon
Description: Iaidō (居合道) is a skill where the user quickly draws the blade to strike, then re-sheaths it after every attack. The speed of the user is so fast that it can allow the user to draw his blade and strike twice and then return it to its sheath in half a second. Passive, 3 round cool.

Name:Berserker Style: Charge
Canon/Custom: Custom
Type: Taijutsu
Element: -
Distance: Self
Description: The user builds momentum and begins to charge. Once charging, they can only charge in a straight path and cannot veer from it. When they charge, anything in the path of them is easily tackled or broken through. Wall up to 7 feet thick can be plowed through if momentum of at least 20 mph is achieved. If contact is made when charging, the victim can suffer from broken bones and severe bruising. On the other hand, if the user strikes anything large than 7 feet, they become disoriented for 1-2 posts and the area impacted is dented and cracked. Cool down of 4 posts.

B Rank

Name: Kage Bushin no Jutsu
Canon/Custom: Canon
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: -
Distance: Any
Description: Kage Bunshin is a Jounin level Ninjutsu technique. When Naruto stole the scroll of seals, he learned this technique as well. The normal Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja that lacks any substance. The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. This makes Kage Bunshin an excellent training method if the ninja has the chakra capacity and stamina to maintain the Kage Bunshins for an extended period of time. This allows the ninja to essentially reduce the time it takes to train and learn with each clone added. This is especially true when used with Tajuu Kage Bunshin

Name: Berserker Style: Bazooka
Canon/Custom: Custom
Type: Taijutsu
Element: -
Distance: Close
Description: Charge equal to handseals. After the charge, the user sends chakra into the palms of their hands hands must be together), giving them extreme hitting force. Once the user slams their palms into the target. Unlike standard B rank tajutsu, which usually bruise bone and severely bruise skin and muscle, this taijutsu can snap bones into multiple pieces. If the user slams both hands into a single target (Base of palms need to be touching for this effect to occur), organs up to six inches from the impacted area are ruptured and bones are broken. With the force, strikes can knock people back or even send them flying through the air. If a target is firmly planted, they are send back up to 10 feet, but if them are not or are in air, then they can be sent back up to 40 feet. 5 post cool down.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dgEzykY9Alg&feature=related


A Rank

Name: Berserker Style: Gatling Fists
Canon/Custom: Custom
Type: Taijutsu
Element: -
Distance: Close
Description: Charge equal to hand seals. After a charge, the user sends chakra into their arms to increase punching speed, making them able to fire off over three punches in a second for ten seconds total. The force of the punches are light in comparison to other taijutsu techniques, having only the power to bruise skin, muscle, and bone but makes up for it in sheer amount of hits that can be laid. If hit multiple times in the same spots, bone can fracture or break. Internal organs can rupture. Disorientation is also common if a hit is laid to the head. The more hits laid, the further back the target is pushed up to 35 yards. If a wall or other obstacle is in the way, a large dent, up to three feet deep can be formed from the slamming into it. Cool down of 6 posts.

S Rank

Name: Berserker Style: Rampage
Canon/Custom: Custom
Type: Taijutsu
Element: -
Distance: Close
Description: Charge equal to handseals. After a charge, the user enters a stupor like state, similar to the Drunken Fist, sacrificing intelligence for strength. While in this jutsu the user's heart rate increases drastically to increase blood flow to his limbs, thus providing them with more oxygen which gives them the ability to use any berserker style jutsu with great ease and a limited amount of posts, along with a 40% increase to taijutsu moves. To start, all Berserker Style taijutsu moves under B rank can be used without charging at all, all A and S Rank Berserker Style to be used with a single post of charging. Though, because of the nature of this jutsu, it can only be used so often due to the increase strain on the body. Directly after use, the user must eat something since the increased heart rate means more calories are burned. If something is not eaten within 1-2 posts after use, the user will pass out. This jutsu lasts for 5 posts and can be used once per topic, but only once per week.

______________________________________________________________________________
Missions:
 







Last edited by Renga Zakii on Tue Apr 17, 2012 7:55 pm; edited 4 times in total
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Renga Zakii
Chūnin
avatar

Posts : 33
Ryo : 2200

Ninja Info Card
Chakra:
200/200  (200/200)

PostSubject: Re: [Renga Zakii/ Jutsu Registration]   Wed Mar 28, 2012 2:21 pm

Bump on Bazooka

______________________________________________________________________________
Missions:
 





Back to top Go down
View user profile
Dominic Edrick
Shiokage
avatar

Posts : 971
Ryo : 64600

Ninja Info Card
Chakra:
410/410  (410/410)

PostSubject: Re: [Renga Zakii/ Jutsu Registration]   Wed Mar 28, 2012 3:24 pm

Bazooka - How close do the palms have to be together to rupture organs? Obviously if they are far enough apart, this won't happen. Give me your answer to this, then bump. Don't put it in the tech, just answer the question.

______________________________________________________________________________








Back to top Go down
View user profile
Rohim Edrick
Jōnin
avatar

Posts : 165
Ryo : 15403

Ninja Info Card
Chakra:
280/280  (280/280)

PostSubject: Re: [Renga Zakii/ Jutsu Registration]   Wed Mar 28, 2012 3:45 pm

I'm standing right next to Bagley, and he asked me to post for him. The palms have to be together to even perform the jutsu, so that's your answer.. they need to be together.

______________________________________________________________________________
"Defend the King." - Asuma Sarutobi






Back to top Go down
View user profile
Dominic Edrick
Shiokage
avatar

Posts : 971
Ryo : 64600

Ninja Info Card
Chakra:
410/410  (410/410)

PostSubject: Re: [Renga Zakii/ Jutsu Registration]   Wed Mar 28, 2012 5:29 pm

Ok, then all that is required is an edit of that information and a bump.

______________________________________________________________________________








Back to top Go down
View user profile
Renga Zakii
Chūnin
avatar

Posts : 33
Ryo : 2200

Ninja Info Card
Chakra:
200/200  (200/200)

PostSubject: Re: [Renga Zakii/ Jutsu Registration]   Wed Mar 28, 2012 5:37 pm

Bumpage

______________________________________________________________________________
Missions:
 





Back to top Go down
View user profile
Dominic Edrick
Shiokage
avatar

Posts : 971
Ryo : 64600

Ninja Info Card
Chakra:
410/410  (410/410)

PostSubject: Re: [Renga Zakii/ Jutsu Registration]   Wed Mar 28, 2012 5:45 pm

Renga Zakii wrote:
If the user slams both hands into a single target


(Base of palms need to be touching for this effect to occur)

Add that into the spot right after the word target within the application. It still doesnt say clearly that the palmns must be touching on impact and this will clear that up.

______________________________________________________________________________








Back to top Go down
View user profile
Renga Zakii
Chūnin
avatar

Posts : 33
Ryo : 2200

Ninja Info Card
Chakra:
200/200  (200/200)

PostSubject: Re: [Renga Zakii/ Jutsu Registration]   Wed Mar 28, 2012 5:53 pm

Done

______________________________________________________________________________
Missions:
 





Back to top Go down
View user profile
Dominic Edrick
Shiokage
avatar

Posts : 971
Ryo : 64600

Ninja Info Card
Chakra:
410/410  (410/410)

PostSubject: Re: [Renga Zakii/ Jutsu Registration]   Wed Mar 28, 2012 6:14 pm

Ok, now for the area. Is the area of the place hit the only part that breaks and ruptures? Or is it greater? Remember the base of ones palms arent that large. So if the area is greater, by how much?

Also, that version Of Kage Bunshin isnt the approved version I remember. The one I remember has a limited number that can be made.

______________________________________________________________________________








Back to top Go down
View user profile
Haru Satsujin
S-Rank
avatar

Posts : 276
Ryo : 3500

Ninja Info Card
Chakra:
320/320  (320/320)

PostSubject: Re: [Renga Zakii/ Jutsu Registration]   Wed Mar 28, 2012 6:18 pm

The palms also force in the surrounding area, so probably anything within a six inch radius would rupture.

The Kage Bushin issue now, would you kindly PM it to me or post it below?

______________________________________________________________________________

~Blood alone moves the wheels of history~
~Maritn Luther~



Spoiler:
 
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Dominic Edrick
Shiokage
avatar

Posts : 971
Ryo : 64600

Ninja Info Card
Chakra:
410/410  (410/410)

PostSubject: Re: [Renga Zakii/ Jutsu Registration]   Wed Mar 28, 2012 6:42 pm

At B Rank, that should suffice. Make that edit.

Gimme some time to find the Kage Bunshin, but I remember someone had it

______________________________________________________________________________








Back to top Go down
View user profile
Haru Satsujin
S-Rank
avatar

Posts : 276
Ryo : 3500

Ninja Info Card
Chakra:
320/320  (320/320)

PostSubject: Re: [Renga Zakii/ Jutsu Registration]   Wed Mar 28, 2012 6:50 pm

Bumpino

______________________________________________________________________________

~Blood alone moves the wheels of history~
~Maritn Luther~



Spoiler:
 
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Dominic Edrick
Shiokage
avatar

Posts : 971
Ryo : 64600

Ninja Info Card
Chakra:
410/410  (410/410)

PostSubject: Re: [Renga Zakii/ Jutsu Registration]   Wed Mar 28, 2012 7:04 pm

Bazooka - Approved


______________________________________________________________________________








Back to top Go down
View user profile
Haru Satsujin
S-Rank
avatar

Posts : 276
Ryo : 3500

Ninja Info Card
Chakra:
320/320  (320/320)

PostSubject: Re: [Renga Zakii/ Jutsu Registration]   Sun Apr 08, 2012 12:35 am

Added an S Rank

______________________________________________________________________________

~Blood alone moves the wheels of history~
~Maritn Luther~



Spoiler:
 
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Neji Hitogumo
Jōnin
avatar

Posts : 35
Ryo : 3800

Ninja Info Card
Chakra:
280/280  (280/280)

PostSubject: Re: [Renga Zakii/ Jutsu Registration]   Tue Apr 10, 2012 9:30 pm

Bump

______________________________________________________________________________
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Renga Zakii
Chūnin
avatar

Posts : 33
Ryo : 2200

Ninja Info Card
Chakra:
200/200  (200/200)

PostSubject: Re: [Renga Zakii/ Jutsu Registration]   Thu Apr 12, 2012 6:39 pm

Bump

______________________________________________________________________________
Missions:
 





Back to top Go down
View user profile
Haru Satsujin
S-Rank
avatar

Posts : 276
Ryo : 3500

Ninja Info Card
Chakra:
320/320  (320/320)

PostSubject: Re: [Renga Zakii/ Jutsu Registration]   Mon Apr 16, 2012 5:37 pm

Bump

______________________________________________________________________________

~Blood alone moves the wheels of history~
~Maritn Luther~



Spoiler:
 
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Dominic Edrick
Shiokage
avatar

Posts : 971
Ryo : 64600

Ninja Info Card
Chakra:
410/410  (410/410)

PostSubject: Re: [Renga Zakii/ Jutsu Registration]   Mon Apr 16, 2012 10:05 pm

Bazooka - The description is still all over the place. Split it up into paragraphs. One handed effect and two handed. Your current setup has your contradicting the technique.

______________________________________________________________________________








Back to top Go down
View user profile
Haru Satsujin
S-Rank
avatar

Posts : 276
Ryo : 3500

Ninja Info Card
Chakra:
320/320  (320/320)

PostSubject: Re: [Renga Zakii/ Jutsu Registration]   Mon Apr 16, 2012 10:10 pm

Dominic Edrick wrote:
Bazooka - Approved


You already approved Bazooka. I want to focus on the S Rank jutsu now. I'll go back to bazooka later, but for now can we knock this out?

______________________________________________________________________________

~Blood alone moves the wheels of history~
~Maritn Luther~



Spoiler:
 
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Sponsored content




PostSubject: Re: [Renga Zakii/ Jutsu Registration]   

Back to top Go down
 
[Renga Zakii/ Jutsu Registration]
Back to top 
Page 1 of 2Go to page : 1, 2  Next

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
Naruto Savage Lands :: Shinobi Info Cards :: Jutsu Creation-
Jump to: