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Ravine
Tokubetsu Jōnin
Ravine


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PostSubject: Ravine Sato   Ravine Sato I_icon_minitimeMon Mar 05, 2012 2:33 am



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First Name: Ravine
Last Name: Sato
Gender: Female
Height: 5'7
Weight: 120 lbs
Age: 17
Birthday: January 1

Village: Harikengakure
Rank: Special Jounin
Elements: Water, Earth, Wind
Specializations: Ijutsu, Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Fuuinjutsu


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Personality: Ravine is a very moody teenager, most of the time too emotional towards others. Often cries a lot when she does not get what she wants or sometimes just because someone did not like what she is doing. She is very clumsy in tons of ways that sometimes she puts others in danger, that's why she needs constant protection. She likes to help others and wants to be a top medical ninja in the future which tends to her becoming a bit bookish, but is still into the social part of life. Fighting isn't really a forte of her, but excels greatly in support, but DO NOT under estimate this tough little cookie, for when faced in the dangers of battle, Ravine shows an exceptional side, sometimes even using her clumsiness to her advantage to gain victory.

Ravine gets lost a lot of times. She still does not know how to read a map and a compass properly, so she tends to turn up in random areas almost always, but she manages to arrive at a particular destination. Lucky, she truly is when it comes to things like this. She likes to hang out a lot in watery places such as the lake and the waterfalls, maybe this is due to her affiliation with water, also always wearing a different kind of bikini everytime she's on it.

Getting a lot of attention as a child, she was treated with a lot of care and therefore is sometimes dependent. She has this attitude where she acts like child, though cute to others, is annoying to some. Though spoiled as a child, she never really needed a lot of things that she got, so she donates those items to the orphanage, showing her kindheartedness in more ways than one, also joining missions to feed the hungry. She has a soft heart especially to kids who live in poverty.


Likes: Ravine likes a lot of things. Too many things, even. She has a short attention span which makes everything almost a like she’d pursue for a day. But most of all, she likes puppies and cakes to relieve of daily stress. And lollipops too.
Dislikes: Ravine hates crowds, she was never made for them. But she always tries to blend in. If there's one thing she never wants to encounter, it's a rat. She's very scared of them. She also isn't a fan of combat, but sure is not a newbie regarding battles.
Motivation: The great injuries and deaths which are the results of shinobi wars and conflicts. Also to become the greatest medical specialist ever. Also, one that motivates her the most is her enthusiastic feel in everyday life. She deems that every single day is special and unique. It gets her running with the thought of 'something's waiting for her somewhere.'
Fears: Gigantic Rats. And cats. But cats are more of a dislike, but she'd rather have 10 feet away from them. She also fears the loss of loved ones. As a medical ninja, losing a life is a deep gash to her soul.

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History: As a toddler, Ravine had everything she ever wanted, a happy family, a great set of friends and the mere fact that she lived a normal life. Her parents often spoiled her with gifts to please their only child. Ravine got great friends in school and out of school as well. She was considered one of the most popular girls in school, but she wasn't one of those mean ones.

Ravine got straight A's in the academy, until one day at the academy, the kage had noticed her excellence in the field of medical ninjutsu. Even at a young age, Ravine had already read books about the medical arts and had practiced at home and at the school's clinic, tending to help the school nurse.

She didn't like the spotlight, but when the academy was attacked by rogue ninjas and everything was destroyed, many were injured and the nurses were killed. She had no choice but to take charge of healing the other students and even some of the teachers there, which elevated her in top ranks of the entire school.

After graduating from the ninja academy, Ravine started to train more in the Medical Arts, granting her great focus in chakra control and also visiting the hospital in the village, helping the nurses there when she has time. She is kind-hearted and is a great learner, seems dumb at times, but can really show how great her understanding is, well, most of the time that is.

One day while she was fishing near tha banks of the lake, a pack of missing nins attacked a little boy who was bathing near the trees. She heard the scream and got there a little bit too late, she checked if the boy was still breathing, and he was. The hospital was too far away and the only thing, or only person that could save him was her. Thank goodness she studied medical ninjutsu, for she saved the boy, but barely lost him in the process. It was there that she knew the harshness of encountering with such dangerous shinobi. And that was one of the events in her life that really pushed her to become a great Ijutsu specialist.


RP Sample: Ravine was sun bathing at the shores wearing her tiny pink bikini, looking at the sky with her new sun glasses on, oil covering her body, when a ninja suddenly threw a shuriken that hit right beside her. She stood up and yelled "Hey! what's your problem!? if you need sun screen you should have just asked!". Then the ninja who threw the shuriken got pissed by Ravine's stupidity. He went into his pocket, got some projectile weapons and threw 5 exploding kunais at her. Making the sand go all over her hair and her oil stained body. Ravine then knew that the ninja was not after any sun screen. He was after her sun tan oil! "Oh this is on!" She put her gloves on, clenching her fist as she did and grabbed the sun tan oil. "Come and get it!" she winks to provoke the rogue ninja, flicking her index finger as she spoke.

Deep inside her thoughts, she knew that this ninja did not stand a chance, for she had already planned out a strategic way of knocking him out cold without permanently destroying his face. She ran fast, concentrating chakra around her feet, dashing towards him, also concentrating chakra on her glove-covered fist as she ran. Dodging the punch of the opponent by ducking, and set a chakra filled upper-cut right to his chin. Then the rogue ninja flew towards the far away who knows where.

She got back to her spot, dusting off her things from the sand that went everywhere, putting everything back into her bag "Darn, I didn't even get to enjoy my afternoon" she motioned her head in a disappointed manner.



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Ravine
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PostSubject: Re: Ravine Sato   Ravine Sato I_icon_minitimeThu Mar 08, 2012 7:06 am

DONE~
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Dominic Edrick
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PostSubject: Re: Ravine Sato   Ravine Sato I_icon_minitimeThu Mar 08, 2012 10:37 am

All that I see is that your motivations and fears need to be longer. Atleast as long as a paragraph. Even if your clanless, you need to include the clan section and just label everything N/A
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Ravine
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Ravine


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PostSubject: Re: Ravine Sato   Ravine Sato I_icon_minitimeFri Mar 16, 2012 11:47 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Ravine Sato   Ravine Sato I_icon_minitimeFri Mar 16, 2012 11:54 pm

You have the clan section in the wrong place. Take a look at another app and youll see you mistake. The clan section is meant to go after your fears.
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Ravine
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Ravine


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Ryo : 8700

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PostSubject: Re: Ravine Sato   Ravine Sato I_icon_minitimeSat Mar 17, 2012 11:23 am

Moved~
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PostSubject: Re: Ravine Sato   Ravine Sato I_icon_minitimeSat Mar 17, 2012 12:20 pm

I know your pushed for time, so I wont ask you to expand your personality section now. For future characters though, make the personality section larger. I would like for you when you get the time, to expand this one though. For now....

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